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What happens when friendship and love collide8 total reviews
Comment from Valkarie
You write such thought provoking words that get the reader thinking, which is so good. This piece is exactly as it is in a relationship, when doubt arises then it goes no where and its better to call the whole thing off.
Your words are powerful,concise and lay the foundation for the complexity of any relationship to work.
Very good piece indeed.
Valkarie...
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2010
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You write such thought provoking words that get the reader thinking, which is so good. This piece is exactly as it is in a relationship, when doubt arises then it goes no where and its better to call the whole thing off.
Your words are powerful,concise and lay the foundation for the complexity of any relationship to work.
Very good piece indeed.
Valkarie...
Comment Written 08-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2010
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Val how nice of you to join me again...lol...It's like that when a writer reviews someone's work. Like going to see what a friend has to say. Thanks for hanging with me and reviewing my work. xoxo Kiwi
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You'rea good writer and I like to read what you say in words because piece is quite different,which again is good. V...
Comment from djuan
"it will never be simple and satisfying" How beautifully said. You have been on a role this week. Keep it up, I love reading your posts!
Well Done!
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
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"it will never be simple and satisfying" How beautifully said. You have been on a role this week. Keep it up, I love reading your posts!
Well Done!
Comment Written 07-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
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Thank you Don for this review and for taking your time to always have a positive reflection on my work. Means a lot to me. xoxo Kiwi
Comment from Kathryn Varuzza
Kiwi,
Powerful poem.
Heartfelt.
Flows well.
Great image and visual presentation.
Love how you positioned the words.
Good title too.
I like the first and last stanzas the best.
Relationships are complicated, that's all there is to it...
hugs,
Katie
p.s. I love that song in your author's notes.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
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Kiwi,
Powerful poem.
Heartfelt.
Flows well.
Great image and visual presentation.
Love how you positioned the words.
Good title too.
I like the first and last stanzas the best.
Relationships are complicated, that's all there is to it...
hugs,
Katie
p.s. I love that song in your author's notes.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
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Thanks so much my friend! I've started adding music just because with out those three elements, words, art, and music my life would not be nearly as good as it is. Thanks again for the comments and for being such a wonderful friend! xoxo Deborah
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Deborah, you're welcome. Yes, who can live a day without music? Not I!
xoxo,
katie
Comment from Sasha
This is an excellent poem and so very true. I enjoyed it and found it one I could personally relate to. I just love MoomWillow's art, she is simply amazing. Keep up the great work.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
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This is an excellent poem and so very true. I enjoyed it and found it one I could personally relate to. I just love MoomWillow's art, she is simply amazing. Keep up the great work.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
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Yes the art was so beautiful. Yours is too gf. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. xoxo Kiwi
Comment from Ankh
This has got to be one of your shorter posts. But it still packs a punch. The imagery is good and paints a vivid picture for the reader. Well done once again :-)~
Seth x
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
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This has got to be one of your shorter posts. But it still packs a punch. The imagery is good and paints a vivid picture for the reader. Well done once again :-)~
Seth x
Comment Written 07-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
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Thanks again Seth...lol...changed a word to two words after I read your review so now it's one word longer...lol...thanks for reading and reviewing my work. You leave me feeling like I just had a great breath mint. xoxo Kiwi
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Lol....you can put me on your tongue anytime x
Comment from InterestingRon
Kiwigirll often uses her poetry to explore complex human emotions. This beautifully composed poem is tackling the difficult problem of love and friendship. Is it possible to be truly in love with someone if you are not even friends? Once again a stunning presentation to encase her words. Ron XOX
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
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Kiwigirll often uses her poetry to explore complex human emotions. This beautifully composed poem is tackling the difficult problem of love and friendship. Is it possible to be truly in love with someone if you are not even friends? Once again a stunning presentation to encase her words. Ron XOX
Comment Written 07-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
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Thanks I like this little muse...I appreciate so much your loyalty where I am concerned. You are without a doubt such an accomplished writer yourself, it humbles me that you always say such incredibly nice things about my work. Thank you. xoox Kiwi
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Your work is almost as nice as you. XOX Ron
Comment from Rama Rao
Your short poem is excellent, but you seem to have used your poetic licence when you used the expression hand and hand. Such an expression I haven't heard until now. It's hand-in-hand. Did u have any special reason to use it?
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
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Your short poem is excellent, but you seem to have used your poetic licence when you used the expression hand and hand. Such an expression I haven't heard until now. It's hand-in-hand. Did u have any special reason to use it?
Comment Written 07-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
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Thank you for the read and review of my work. I appreciate the find of my "poetic license" as well...tc xoxo Kiwi
Comment from Irene D. Garces
Hmmm..let me see what this is all about. Two friends, happy as they are, suddenly fall inloved with each other. After a while (due to petty quarrels, etc.) fall out of love. Regrets enter into the picture. Things changed...
Search for another love comes...
Yes, it is for real that when friends fall in loved, it is a very happy feeling. But when love is gone the friendship is gone too. The relationship (both the love and the friendship) is totally damaged. Repairing this is not at all easy.
Think of the best remedy... PRAYERS...These will surely help...Try it...
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
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Hmmm..let me see what this is all about. Two friends, happy as they are, suddenly fall inloved with each other. After a while (due to petty quarrels, etc.) fall out of love. Regrets enter into the picture. Things changed...
Search for another love comes...
Yes, it is for real that when friends fall in loved, it is a very happy feeling. But when love is gone the friendship is gone too. The relationship (both the love and the friendship) is totally damaged. Repairing this is not at all easy.
Think of the best remedy... PRAYERS...These will surely help...Try it...
Comment Written 07-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2010
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Thank you Irene for the read and review of my work and for the wonderful suggestion ... tc xoxo Kiwi
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You're welcome, Friend.
irene