Emotions of Love and Life
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Comment from TT7Z
Nice work, clearly written. Nice rhyme and meter. Such pent up rage being projected in this writing. Such pity on the physical fixated man. Such feeling of being unwanted or as if you can't measure up. Such a godly woman you are to see man's blind ways and write it so clearly. Very nice piece. In your notes you wrote ' Sex men's more then...' did you mean to say ' Sex means more than...'
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2010
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Nice work, clearly written. Nice rhyme and meter. Such pent up rage being projected in this writing. Such pity on the physical fixated man. Such feeling of being unwanted or as if you can't measure up. Such a godly woman you are to see man's blind ways and write it so clearly. Very nice piece. In your notes you wrote ' Sex men's more then...' did you mean to say ' Sex means more than...'
Comment Written 01-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2010
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Yes oops. I'm not perfect either. Thanks for the correction and kind words.
Comment from Aislinge
Nicely done. The piece flows well, with a pleasing meter. The rhyme gives the poem a nice lilt. Nice commentary; I've got the feeling, though, that there are men out there who have far more depth than this, and my guess is a good many of them have found Godly women. At least that's the hope!
Thank you for a great read.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2010
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Nicely done. The piece flows well, with a pleasing meter. The rhyme gives the poem a nice lilt. Nice commentary; I've got the feeling, though, that there are men out there who have far more depth than this, and my guess is a good many of them have found Godly women. At least that's the hope!
Thank you for a great read.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2010
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind words. They are greatly appreciated.
Comment from Nanashirley
It is a great poem with a lot of feeling and meaning. I also feel a lot of hate. There is a deep flow and you can feel it as you read. I saw no need for editing but I was reading intently. Nice picture.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2010
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It is a great poem with a lot of feeling and meaning. I also feel a lot of hate. There is a deep flow and you can feel it as you read. I saw no need for editing but I was reading intently. Nice picture.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2010
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Thank you for your kind words. They are greatly appreciated.