The Fisherman
A naval patrol boat encounters a fisherman13 total reviews
Comment from highlander104
I just love this story; gave me a bit of a chuckle first thing this morning. I found no spags and certainly nothing to change.
Good luck in the contest. You should be a good contender here.
Jean K.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2010
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I just love this story; gave me a bit of a chuckle first thing this morning. I found no spags and certainly nothing to change.
Good luck in the contest. You should be a good contender here.
Jean K.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2010
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From your mouth...
Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it
Comment from Realist101
Hi there! This is a really delightful tale, I love the old man...and the end is great! GPS!! Everyone thought he was just a natural. HA! Good one Snodlander...this will do well in the contest!! My best to you!! Susan!! UPDATE! Congratulations!! I knew this would do well, ") Great job, this is a wonderful tale. Susan
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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2010
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Hi there! This is a really delightful tale, I love the old man...and the end is great! GPS!! Everyone thought he was just a natural. HA! Good one Snodlander...this will do well in the contest!! My best to you!! Susan!! UPDATE! Congratulations!! I knew this would do well, ") Great job, this is a wonderful tale. Susan
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Comment Written 24-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2010
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I hope so. Glad you liked it. Thank you
Comment from Adri7enne
You continue to amaze me. What a great concept for a story-an old fisherman with one foot in the past and another in the future. And best of all, he hides the electronics from the patrol, letting them believe he has supernatural skills. Wry humour. Loved it!
"Under the coolie hat his face crumpled into A network of deep crevasses." I think you need 'A' NETWORK. Admirable sentence, nonetheless.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2010
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You continue to amaze me. What a great concept for a story-an old fisherman with one foot in the past and another in the future. And best of all, he hides the electronics from the patrol, letting them believe he has supernatural skills. Wry humour. Loved it!
"Under the coolie hat his face crumpled into A network of deep crevasses." I think you need 'A' NETWORK. Admirable sentence, nonetheless.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2010
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Oops, thanks for the spag, the review and the generous score. The pressure to amaze you is telling on me. I had a full head of hair when you started reviewing me.
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Funny man! You really should be sending these stories out to magazines. They're all professional quality work. I enjoy your work above anybody's on site, and I'm an avid reader. You write the kind of stuff that should be gobbled up by the right publications. I suppose you're waiting to retire, huh? Anyway....Good stuff, Snod!
