Shadow Lady
A fantasy visit15 total reviews
Comment from Amina Ahmed
a beautiful poem with a lovely expression. i like the depth which is indeed touching. wonderful piece of art chosen. keep it up and take care
bye
reply by Anonymous Member on 15-Aug-2010
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a beautiful poem with a lovely expression. i like the depth which is indeed touching. wonderful piece of art chosen. keep it up and take care
bye
Comment Written 15-Aug-2010
reply by Anonymous Member on 15-Aug-2010
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Hi Amina, and thank you for your kind words, and the excellent rating! irish
Comment from KayteeF
A lovely memorial poem in tribute to an old friend.
Despite being a free verse poem, it has a melancholic rhythm which is soothing as well.
I can feel the forest stream and smell the fragrant blossoms.
I can also feel the sense of lingering loss.
reply by Anonymous Member on 15-Aug-2010
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A lovely memorial poem in tribute to an old friend.
Despite being a free verse poem, it has a melancholic rhythm which is soothing as well.
I can feel the forest stream and smell the fragrant blossoms.
I can also feel the sense of lingering loss.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2010
reply by Anonymous Member on 15-Aug-2010
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Thank you Cathleen, I do appreciate your kind words, and the excellent rating! Some people leave their footprinys in your heart, this lady was one of those. Thanks again. irish
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written with good form, good flow,good meter, a beautiful picture and a wonderful tribute to the woman who still lives in your dreams. great job on this
reply by Anonymous Member on 15-Aug-2010
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this is very well written with good form, good flow,good meter, a beautiful picture and a wonderful tribute to the woman who still lives in your dreams. great job on this
Comment Written 15-Aug-2010
reply by Anonymous Member on 15-Aug-2010
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Thank you, I appreciate your encouragement, and I am heartened that my little effort was understood, as well as read. Thank you for the excellent rating! irish
Comment from Spiritual Echo
This is almost brilliant.
Floundered a bit through the "gainst" line but never lost me and made me forget that I was just racking up points.
This was a bittersweet memory.
Never knew it when we had it, but I still have some petals in my life to ensure that I remeber. Thanks,
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reply by Anonymous Member on 15-Aug-2010
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This is almost brilliant.
Floundered a bit through the "gainst" line but never lost me and made me forget that I was just racking up points.
This was a bittersweet memory.
Never knew it when we had it, but I still have some petals in my life to ensure that I remeber. Thanks,
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2010
reply by Anonymous Member on 15-Aug-2010
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Wow, I am touched that you understood and read behind the meaning of the lines. Glad that you stopped by! Thank you for the excellent rating! irish
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2010
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2010
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Wow, thanks, Charlie, I just now posted this, you may have read it before I added the picture. Thank you for the review, and the excellent rating! irish
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You're welcome, Irish. Charlie
