Tales to Terrify Tots
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Comment from Adri7enne
Well, the opener was a page right out of your life, uh snod. The snazy shorts! LOL! LOved it!
Damn! Is that why I've been stuffed up all week? Even went to outpatient care this week. Doctor didn't show. Anyway, I think it's going away. Thanks for asking. LOL!
You are positively gross. KIds must adore you!
"It might surprise you to learn that not many people leaving school want a job as a snot shoveller." Go figure!
Ah, you're inspired! Had me giggling most of the last few paragraphs. Yeah, kids must love you, you talented nutter. Loving it.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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Well, the opener was a page right out of your life, uh snod. The snazy shorts! LOL! LOved it!
Damn! Is that why I've been stuffed up all week? Even went to outpatient care this week. Doctor didn't show. Anyway, I think it's going away. Thanks for asking. LOL!
You are positively gross. KIds must adore you!
"It might surprise you to learn that not many people leaving school want a job as a snot shoveller." Go figure!
Ah, you're inspired! Had me giggling most of the last few paragraphs. Yeah, kids must love you, you talented nutter. Loving it.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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They either love me or are terrified by me. Thanks for the review
Comment from Mª Luisa López Pisú
Muy bien veo tu historia escrita, pero a mi parecer hay cosas o palabras desagradables que sobran en un escrito, y eso tendras que cambiar a mi parecer.
Por lo de m¡s la historia est¡ conseguida, saludos de Din¡mica
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2010
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Muy bien veo tu historia escrita, pero a mi parecer hay cosas o palabras desagradables que sobran en un escrito, y eso tendras que cambiar a mi parecer.
Por lo de m¡s la historia est¡ conseguida, saludos de Din¡mica
Comment Written 22-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2010
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Thanks. This is my first Spanish review, and my Spanish starts and stops with 'mi faro tiene demasiados caballos dentro'. It looks as though you find some words disagreeable? That was sort of the idea. Kids love stories with bodily fluids in. Thanks for the review
Comment from adewpearl
You've had tropical outifts in other of your writings - I take it you fancy what we Yankees call Hawaiian shirts? LOL
her nose as empty as a baby girl's head - is that a bit of chauvenism working its way into this story??? LOL
Oh, what a delightfully gross explanation of the slugs' silvery tracks
pinning her body to the head under a mound of congealing snot - oh, that is such a good visual, and I don't want it to be such a good visual because it is totally disgusting. LOL
These two are just the best pair in the world - I love their attitude with each other. Brooke
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2010
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You've had tropical outifts in other of your writings - I take it you fancy what we Yankees call Hawaiian shirts? LOL
her nose as empty as a baby girl's head - is that a bit of chauvenism working its way into this story??? LOL
Oh, what a delightfully gross explanation of the slugs' silvery tracks
pinning her body to the head under a mound of congealing snot - oh, that is such a good visual, and I don't want it to be such a good visual because it is totally disgusting. LOL
These two are just the best pair in the world - I love their attitude with each other. Brooke
Comment Written 22-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2010
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Thank you. I hope it proved to be an antidote to the tears.
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oh, yes, believe me, it dried up all the tears. LOL