Tales to Terrify Tots
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Comment from WRITER1
I think that child is going to have to see a shrink if this keeps up. I enjoyed this chapter, I just can't imagine where you are coming up with this stuff. Great job.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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I think that child is going to have to see a shrink if this keeps up. I enjoyed this chapter, I just can't imagine where you are coming up with this stuff. Great job.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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I come up with them from my dark, seep subconcious. Be afraid, be very afraid.
Thanks for the review.
Comment from Adri7enne
Oh,what a bad Bogey Man. He is attacking all of the childhood myths and turning everything to horror. LOL!So scary. Fun, though.
Children will love this. Are these the stories you told your kids and are you getting them ready for the grand kiddied? They should love this.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2010
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Oh,what a bad Bogey Man. He is attacking all of the childhood myths and turning everything to horror. LOL!So scary. Fun, though.
Children will love this. Are these the stories you told your kids and are you getting them ready for the grand kiddied? They should love this.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2010
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no, I never told them to my kids, and no grandkids on teh horizon. Thanks for reading
Comment from marcellawachtel
. . . and I almost skipped this! Wonderfully surrealistic tale that would terrify any tot with her wits about her. The Bogey Man, benign as he may seem, is a force to reckon with, and fortunately Annabelle can. No matter how much he tries, she won't stay scared for long. Wonderful descriptive writing, and far-out pixies and fairies with different functions.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2010
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. . . and I almost skipped this! Wonderfully surrealistic tale that would terrify any tot with her wits about her. The Bogey Man, benign as he may seem, is a force to reckon with, and fortunately Annabelle can. No matter how much he tries, she won't stay scared for long. Wonderful descriptive writing, and far-out pixies and fairies with different functions.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2010
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You're very kind, thank you. I'm glad you decided not to skip it
Comment from idnami
This is AWESOME! It is wonderfully Roald Dahlesque and ridiculous. The way the Bogey Man toys with Annabelle is extremely funny and witty.
The story within the story is well crafted as well. I especially love:
"Fairies!" exclaimed Annabelle. "It's tooth fairies, not tooth pixies. Whoever heard of tooth pixies?"
Tooth pixies, as Anne knew, because she wasn't stupid; tooth pixies work with the tooth fairies in the distribution of baby teeth. Anne knew, unlike some other stupid girls I could mention ...
"I'm not stupid! Stop calling me stupid!"
Also the clever little girl who could trick the Bogey Man into entertaining her but still gets tricked by him is very satisfying.
I really, really enjoyed this story tremendously.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2010
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This is AWESOME! It is wonderfully Roald Dahlesque and ridiculous. The way the Bogey Man toys with Annabelle is extremely funny and witty.
The story within the story is well crafted as well. I especially love:
"Fairies!" exclaimed Annabelle. "It's tooth fairies, not tooth pixies. Whoever heard of tooth pixies?"
Tooth pixies, as Anne knew, because she wasn't stupid; tooth pixies work with the tooth fairies in the distribution of baby teeth. Anne knew, unlike some other stupid girls I could mention ...
"I'm not stupid! Stop calling me stupid!"
Also the clever little girl who could trick the Bogey Man into entertaining her but still gets tricked by him is very satisfying.
I really, really enjoyed this story tremendously.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2010
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You're very kind. Thanks for the review and generous score