Tales to Terrify Tots
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Comment from WRITER1
This is a book that I know children will just love to read. It is so full of imagination. You are really quite a clever storyteller.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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This is a book that I know children will just love to read. It is so full of imagination. You are really quite a clever storyteller.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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You're very kind. I think Roal Dahl got there before me, but kids love to be frightened in a safe environment. And of course, if it involves bodily fluids, so much the better. Thanks
Comment from Adri7enne
"Finally there was the muffled noise that sounded like Daddy shouting with his hand over his mouth, which meant that yet again he had caught his finger in the ladder." Funny! Guess my sense of humor can be a bit cruel too. Dark, uh?
What a perverse Bogey Man, with a personality that so closely resembles his creator's twisted mind. LOL!
Seriously wonderful story, Snod. You are the master storyteller. Loved it. Congrats. You got it all done. I would have given you a six, but it seems I'm not able to do that. Must have given you one too recently.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2010
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"Finally there was the muffled noise that sounded like Daddy shouting with his hand over his mouth, which meant that yet again he had caught his finger in the ladder." Funny! Guess my sense of humor can be a bit cruel too. Dark, uh?
What a perverse Bogey Man, with a personality that so closely resembles his creator's twisted mind. LOL!
Seriously wonderful story, Snod. You are the master storyteller. Loved it. Congrats. You got it all done. I would have given you a six, but it seems I'm not able to do that. Must have given you one too recently.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2010
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Me? The Bogey Man? How very dare you!
Thanks for the review. I think it's probably because it's an old story the 6 is unavailable, but I'll take a virtual one
Comment from tspencer
Oh, this is exceptional! I was so engrossed in the story I almost screamed myself when the water hit Annabelle. You really had me. This is so good!
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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Oh, this is exceptional! I was so engrossed in the story I almost screamed myself when the water hit Annabelle. You really had me. This is so good!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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Thank you. I'm flattered
Comment from afternoonlight
I had to read this story to my now 23 year old daughter. I have always liked scary stories and totured her with them and I can't wait to try the water trick on my grandsons. Brilliantly written and enjoyed much.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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I had to read this story to my now 23 year old daughter. I have always liked scary stories and totured her with them and I can't wait to try the water trick on my grandsons. Brilliantly written and enjoyed much.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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You're very kind, thanks. Please don't send yout therapy bills for your grandkids to me, though.
Comment from adewpearl
a swimming pool of blood in the attic from the rat blood the attic goblins spit out because who wants to taste something that tastes like rat ice cream. LOLOLOL Your imagination is warped, you know. ;-)
Oh, how mean of our bogeyman to make Anabelle worry that her father might be goblin food, with only his puddled blood left to stain her ceiling. LOL You have a very dark sense of humor - good thing I do too. ;-) Brooke
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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a swimming pool of blood in the attic from the rat blood the attic goblins spit out because who wants to taste something that tastes like rat ice cream. LOLOLOL Your imagination is warped, you know. ;-)
Oh, how mean of our bogeyman to make Anabelle worry that her father might be goblin food, with only his puddled blood left to stain her ceiling. LOL You have a very dark sense of humor - good thing I do too. ;-) Brooke
Comment Written 20-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2010
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'dark sense of humour'- so much nicer than warped, which is what I usually get. Thanks, glad you liked it
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oh, it's warped too, but then again, so is mine. LOL ;-)