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Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "If Not Together, Then Why?"
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Comment from Halfree
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The trouble with a writing prompt entry is that the writer's ability may be taxed because the venue is too restrictive on the writer's talent. This may the case with this entry. There is a lot of talent being constrained by the rules. Conversely, a lot of talent is being revealed. I am not sure which. The poem and not the writer earned four.

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 Comment Written 07-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
    Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
Comment from adewpearl
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You tell quite a full, emotionally intense story in very few words - this is great micro fiction, Carol. You convey effectively the healing power of love, which you contrast well with the breaking power of loss. Brooke

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
    Brooke,

    Thank you so much for the kind words...after the horrendous day I have dad...you soothe my senses...Thank you so much...Smiles to you..
Comment from LadyWave
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I think you conveyed your message very well. I especially liked the last line "Life flowed into my healed heart." Very effective ending!

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
    Ladywave,

    My exact sentiments...I truly believe that love can heal when nothing else can. Thank you for the kind words. Smiles to you...
Comment from Belinda
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Hi, a short but impressive piece. Without the letter S too. Lucky the major's name is not Steve...:) Good luck with this difficult competition.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
    Belinda,

    Just a quickie to get my toes wet again..Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the kind review. Smiles to you...
Comment from bowls
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Exquisite use of broken heart to suggest both a physical and an emotional problem. I love the ending. I'm glad you have Jake return.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
    bowls,

    Thank you very much for the kind review. I truly appreciate it. Smiles to you...
Comment from bluedragon776
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Wow, I am very impressed that you managed to write this great bit without once using the letter 's'. This is a very good entry. I love the artwork. Good Luck with the contest.

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 Comment Written 07-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2010
    bluedragon,

    Thank you for all the kind words. I truly appreciate it. Smiles to you....
reply by bluedragon776 on 07-Jun-2010
    no problem, a pleasure