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Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "If Not Together, Then Why?"Collection of Flash, Micro, etc.
26 total reviews
Comment from --Turtle.
I read this short, and thought about a horrible story that sort of follows the point. But this story was good, easy to read and follow.
At work, a coworker's wife had heart surgery, which turned out well, so that's good, but he told me that someone in the ward had heart surgery, maybe a heart attack, and he was recovering, but his dog died while he was away. Like the dog knew he had a heart attack, but didn't know he survived, and starved itself to death.
The doctors told them not to tell him his dog died.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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I read this short, and thought about a horrible story that sort of follows the point. But this story was good, easy to read and follow.
At work, a coworker's wife had heart surgery, which turned out well, so that's good, but he told me that someone in the ward had heart surgery, maybe a heart attack, and he was recovering, but his dog died while he was away. Like the dog knew he had a heart attack, but didn't know he survived, and starved itself to death.
The doctors told them not to tell him his dog died.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Kingsland
this was a really well written piece of poetry. I found it to work on two levels. One in medicine and the other on a romantic avenue. This was just a delightful piece of poetic verse to have read and written a review for... John
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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this was a really well written piece of poetry. I found it to work on two levels. One in medicine and the other on a romantic avenue. This was just a delightful piece of poetic verse to have read and written a review for... John
Comment Written 10-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
Comment from RebelRose
Very well done. I never realized that there were so many ways you could a whole poem or story and not use the letter "S". You did a great job.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Very well done. I never realized that there were so many ways you could a whole poem or story and not use the letter "S". You did a great job.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Patti,
Thank you...Carol
Comment from sgalletti
I'm pleased you found something to heal your heart! This is prosaic in its presentation...free verse for sure. Best of luck in the contest. Sue
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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I'm pleased you found something to heal your heart! This is prosaic in its presentation...free verse for sure. Best of luck in the contest. Sue
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Deejharrington
The best of luck in the contest. You did a terrific job with such restrictions. You established the characters with so few sentences. But the emotions were loud and clear.
dj
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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The best of luck in the contest. You did a terrific job with such restrictions. You established the characters with so few sentences. But the emotions were loud and clear.
dj
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
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you're welcome
dj
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you're welcome
dj
Comment from MizKat
I love it. You told a very nice story without using one S. I find this very difficult to do. I really enjoyed this and wish you well in the contest. Kat
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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I love it. You told a very nice story without using one S. I find this very difficult to do. I really enjoyed this and wish you well in the contest. Kat
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol D Parker
Your poem is so true. Love can conquer anything.
I like the way you told a complete story with so
few word. You show who, what, when, where and why.
This is excellent. The writing is too. Best of
luck in the comp.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Your poem is so true. Love can conquer anything.
I like the way you told a complete story with so
few word. You show who, what, when, where and why.
This is excellent. The writing is too. Best of
luck in the comp.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
Comment from wierdgrace
what a great writing story for this contest, and the diolouge and the story with the characters, brought the picture to the readers, hope you get many votes, I will watch for it.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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what a great writing story for this contest, and the diolouge and the story with the characters, brought the picture to the readers, hope you get many votes, I will watch for it.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
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this is the best
Comment from Bellringer
Very good. You met the challenge requirements and gave us a quick romance story. Best wishes in the contest. This one is a contender.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Very good. You met the challenge requirements and gave us a quick romance story. Best wishes in the contest. This one is a contender.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
Comment from anne1204
Creative approach to this contest. It is hard to write a story with so few words and not use an S. You did a great job. Good Luck in contest. Anne 1204
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Creative approach to this contest. It is hard to write a story with so few words and not use an S. You did a great job. Good Luck in contest. Anne 1204
Comment Written 08-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2010
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Sorry for my tardiness..Life is not being kind of late. Appreciate your kindness. Smiles, Carol
