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keep your hope alive....

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Comment from findingmyroom
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Michelle, I missed this one. What a precious little gem. Very apt statement of your conviction, succinct and plainly said. Great job and congrats on your win!

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 29-Jun-2010
    thankya!! :)
Comment from toni guerrero
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I enjoyed reading your nice poem very much. I would recommend for othersd to read youe poem because of the concise statement and its significance. Good luck in the contyest and thqank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 05-Jun-2010
    thank you toni :)
reply by toni guerrero on 05-Jun-2010
    YOU ARE SO WELCOME SHELLEY.
Comment from BeautifulLie
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I like this one. Short and sweet but you make a valid point. And the little picture at the bottom work well! Good luck in the contest and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 05-Jun-2010
    thankyathankya :)
Comment from Realist101
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Hi there, very true words. Put very graciously too. I like this picture that moves also. You have wonderful insight in this matter. GOOD poem. Susan

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    thank you susan :)
Comment from wierdgrace
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so much is said in this short poem, and your are truly right, and the saying hope and love, or nothing, wow. strong, emotional, good luck in the contest and hope you get many votes

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    thank you grace :)
Comment from Annmuma
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heaven is
~ hope & love ~
and without that
there is
nothing

Absolutely true, i.e. without hope and love there is nothing. good luck. ann

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    thank you ann :)
Comment from Nicki_Mist
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Much truth and hope and love within such a short verse. Very beautiful and a great explanation as to why you believe there is a heaven. Good luck in the contest and keep writing.
Nicole

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    thank you nicole :)
Comment from RebelRose
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I really like the way you have presented this with the perfect picture. It is very unique both in presentation and composition. Great contest entry.

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2010
    thank you rose :)
Comment from kintesiegel
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this is a short poem that states the obvious to the author and to me that without love and hope we are in a big mess. sometimes short is better than lengthy and philosophical statements

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
    thank you much :)
Comment from yellowrosebud
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What a delightful poem of heaven.You stated truth in so little words.I love the picture you choose.They worked very well together.Well Done and Good Luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2010

reply by the author on 03-Jun-2010
    thank you rosebud :)