Spiritual Oasis
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Thank you, Lord!"a collection of spiritual poems
61 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Eternal Muse, this is lovely. A soothing write about the power of nature. God's gift to us. Lovely final stanza showing your appreciation of all these gifts. Lovely work. War regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
Hello Eternal Muse, this is lovely. A soothing write about the power of nature. God's gift to us. Lovely final stanza showing your appreciation of all these gifts. Lovely work. War regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Dorothy, I am glad you liked it.
Comment from zanya
A poem filled with a quiet but meaningful gratitude to God for our earthly life and what it enables us to experience, the delights of Nature in both sound and color - exquisite language - a poet treat - 6 twinkling stars!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
A poem filled with a quiet but meaningful gratitude to God for our earthly life and what it enables us to experience, the delights of Nature in both sound and color - exquisite language - a poet treat - 6 twinkling stars!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Senyai
Hi Eternal Muse,
What a beautiful tribute to thankfulness! It is good to focus on the good things we' e been given than grouse about all the things we haven't been. You are a very optimistic person and I know it serves you well :))
Beautiful uplifting poem that brought a smile to my lips!
Have a good Sunday,
Senyai
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
Hi Eternal Muse,
What a beautiful tribute to thankfulness! It is good to focus on the good things we' e been given than grouse about all the things we haven't been. You are a very optimistic person and I know it serves you well :))
Beautiful uplifting poem that brought a smile to my lips!
Have a good Sunday,
Senyai
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the great review. I am glad it brightened your day.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
If we follow the model Jesus set before us, we would never stop praying. I now God would want that. God provided all we have and we, as humans, have failed thanking Him fir all if it. Thank you for the beautifully written reminder.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
If we follow the model Jesus set before us, we would never stop praying. I now God would want that. God provided all we have and we, as humans, have failed thanking Him fir all if it. Thank you for the beautifully written reminder.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Barbara. I am glad you liked it.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It's not hard to see the miracles of life, they are all around us. We just have to open our eyes to see them. Some people who live in the depths of despair, still find the little glimmer of hope and carry on. The miracle is inside us all. Well done, this is a really lovely poem. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
It's not hard to see the miracles of life, they are all around us. We just have to open our eyes to see them. Some people who live in the depths of despair, still find the little glimmer of hope and carry on. The miracle is inside us all. Well done, this is a really lovely poem. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Sandra. Yes, there is a lot to be grateful for. He has been very generous.
Comment from palmart
If poem is a travel, yours here is a ticket to the skies of greatness!!! You put the light of importance on the daily show that nature give us for free every single day. If you loose today`s , no problem: tomorrow the inspiration and beauty, will come again. The only requirement is to keep our eyes open and see in the right direction. Thanks for the ride!!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
If poem is a travel, yours here is a ticket to the skies of greatness!!! You put the light of importance on the daily show that nature give us for free every single day. If you loose today`s , no problem: tomorrow the inspiration and beauty, will come again. The only requirement is to keep our eyes open and see in the right direction. Thanks for the ride!!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the great review.
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You`re really welcome, Eternal Muse!
God bless you!
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I was just sitting here looking at the Blue Ridge mountains, thanking God for his many blessings of late and the beauty of the world around me.
This is very deserving of 6 stars. The imagery is absolutely beautiful.
I enjoyed the 10 syllable lines, the rhyme and the rhythm; the alliteration in the 2nd stanza was sweet sounding and soothing.
I loved reading through the descriptive lines of all that you are thankful for and the particular words you used in your poem. They gave me feelings of peace, beauty, and wonderment.
You poem ended beautifully in the last two lines.
Stunning,
Gale
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
I was just sitting here looking at the Blue Ridge mountains, thanking God for his many blessings of late and the beauty of the world around me.
This is very deserving of 6 stars. The imagery is absolutely beautiful.
I enjoyed the 10 syllable lines, the rhyme and the rhythm; the alliteration in the 2nd stanza was sweet sounding and soothing.
I loved reading through the descriptive lines of all that you are thankful for and the particular words you used in your poem. They gave me feelings of peace, beauty, and wonderment.
You poem ended beautifully in the last two lines.
Stunning,
Gale
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the exceptional review and the six stars, Gale. I am so glad it resonated for you.
God bless and love, EM
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You are so very welcome, EM :)
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I love this spiritually uplifting poem about God's gift to us. And how mother Nature is helping us. Miracles in nature happen every day you just have to look for them, they are there.
These happenings in nature create faith. That is the purpose and nature of miracles. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
I love this spiritually uplifting poem about God's gift to us. And how mother Nature is helping us. Miracles in nature happen every day you just have to look for them, they are there.
These happenings in nature create faith. That is the purpose and nature of miracles. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from chatterbox1
Thank you for the spiritual reminder to be thankful, even when you don't think there's no reason for gratitude. I might have reason to feel bitter, but a thankful attitude makes a big difference.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
Thank you for the spiritual reminder to be thankful, even when you don't think there's no reason for gratitude. I might have reason to feel bitter, but a thankful attitude makes a big difference.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely praise poem that covers the sights, and sounds and smells of the day from morning to night. All these beautiful things help remind us to give God for all that He created!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
Lovely praise poem that covers the sights, and sounds and smells of the day from morning to night. All these beautiful things help remind us to give God for all that He created!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Helen. Indeed, there is so much to be grateful for. God has been very generous. It is unfortunate that too many people forget about it.