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Spiritual Oasis

Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Thank you, Lord!"
a collection of spiritual poems

61 total reviews 
Comment from amahra
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There is nothing like hearing philosophy from a gifted poet. It has a great choice of words and phrases. All three stanzas were great though the last one sort of stood out. Great job!

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the great review.
Comment from MissMerri
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Such lovely words and phrases! I was quite carried away. I especially loved the second stanza... it made me feel as if I were right there hearing the birds, smelling the lilac, and I even love the philosophy of life so beautifully expressed... to welcome splendor and say no to gloom. That's just perfect! A beautiful piece of word art and certainly worthy of six stars. Loved it! MM

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the exceptional review and the six stars, Adonna. I am honored.
Comment from royowen
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I think your reasons for both following the Lord, and adhering to promises, his faithfulness, and repeated revelation of a cup that doesn't leak, and always consistently agrees with itself. And you've done it in a most articulate and skilful way as you always do. Well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the very intuitive review, Roy. I am so glad you liked it.
reply by royowen on 12-Oct-2021
    Well done
Comment from Janet Foor
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It's important to every day be grateful for the things we so often take for granted.
Thank you for this lovely reminder to say Thank You Lord!


Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Thank you so much for sharing this lovely poem about the things you are grateful for. This is Thanksgiving weekend here in Canada and we have so much to be thankful for, we are blessed beyond measure.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the exceptional review and the six stars. I am honored.
reply by Anne Johnston on 12-Oct-2021
    You are very welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Thank You, Lord, brings a few items we might see and be entertained by in the brilliant sky. The sun, the moon, rain, and the birds all take part in the wonder. Nice.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Thank you, Lord!
by Eternal Muse

Excellent rhymed poem with lovely imagery and presentation. It's important to remain grateful for what we have. I give thanks to God for my children's health and my health. My children and grandchildren are the best part of my life. The rhyme doesn't seem forced and the poem flows well. I hope to read more of your work.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the great review, Gypsy. Yes, there is a lot to be grateful for. God has been very generous.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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What a wonderful poem! The artwork is so lovely and is a scene with only the glory of Gods' hands. This reads so well and I love the last verse best...swans gliding...How peaceful and perfect!

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the great review.
Comment from Liberty Justice
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Six stars*****Beautiful â?¤ï¸? what a lovely poem filled with inspiration and hope. So much joy as your lyrics flow with ð??µ musical lyrics. AWESOME. Read mine also. Liberty justice

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the exceptional review and the six stars. I am honored.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
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I would consider changing the background to a nice happy color that goes with the poem!

I'm very grateful for everyone and everything in my life! Thank you for sharing and may God bless you;-)

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 12-Oct-2021
    Thank you very much. I think the virginal white background color is good match the spiritual meaning of this poem.
reply by Melodie Michelle on 12-Oct-2021
    ;-)