Weeding my Life
little rhyme, please read author notes35 total reviews
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a nice piece about sorting out a life that is screwed up . It is very inspirational and i enjoyed the beautiful rhymes in some lines. kudos
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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This is a nice piece about sorting out a life that is screwed up . It is very inspirational and i enjoyed the beautiful rhymes in some lines. kudos
Comment Written 09-May-2010
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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Thanks Perp, I am glad you liked my poem. I appreciate your kind comments.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Valkarie
I like this because...It flows so well and is a powerful piece about down days which we all have, then it could be even worse depression. You describe this very well ho you feel dragged down and starting to weed again I like this.
A complex piece of writing with an emotional background that keeps the reader alert, very visual concise.
Valkarie...
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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I like this because...It flows so well and is a powerful piece about down days which we all have, then it could be even worse depression. You describe this very well ho you feel dragged down and starting to weed again I like this.
A complex piece of writing with an emotional background that keeps the reader alert, very visual concise.
Valkarie...
Comment Written 09-May-2010
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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Thanks Valkarie, I am glad you liked my poem and appreciate your very encouraging comments.
Love
Pupa
Comment from writealot2
This is so true of our darkest moods. But wonder of all wonders, God pulls us together and we're up for another day, another week, another chance.
My only change would be in your next to the last verse, say "as best I can", the second "as" is not needed.
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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This is so true of our darkest moods. But wonder of all wonders, God pulls us together and we're up for another day, another week, another chance.
My only change would be in your next to the last verse, say "as best I can", the second "as" is not needed.
Comment Written 09-May-2010
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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Thank you writealot2, I appreciate your comments and your suggestion in this review.
Love
Pupa
Comment from lisadiallo
Totally enjoyed this one so much expression and feeling all packed into so little words is obviously a god given gift, I feel like myself you use poetry as a self help therapy for those inner emotions that at time maybe you find difficult to speak at times loved it keep writing
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Totally enjoyed this one so much expression and feeling all packed into so little words is obviously a god given gift, I feel like myself you use poetry as a self help therapy for those inner emotions that at time maybe you find difficult to speak at times loved it keep writing
Comment Written 09-May-2010
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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Lisa, again I would like to thank you for those generous shining little stars.
Love
Pupa
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you are more than welcome
Comment from Kingsland
It's always darkest before the dawn arrives. I found this poem to be well written and to flow through its thoughts very smoothly. It was a pleasure to have read and written a review for... John
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It's always darkest before the dawn arrives. I found this poem to be well written and to flow through its thoughts very smoothly. It was a pleasure to have read and written a review for... John
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Comment Written 09-May-2010
reply by the author on 12-May-2010
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Thanks John, glad you liked my poem.
Love
Pupa
