Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Riding to forget,"A book of Poetry & Writing
121 total reviews
Comment from lola29
You tell quite a story in your poem. I've no doubt, this has happened many times, and I've got to say, that cowboy is one stoic man.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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You tell quite a story in your poem. I've no doubt, this has happened many times, and I've got to say, that cowboy is one stoic man.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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thanks for the review Lola
Comment from Connie C
I really like this poem, which tells a story, one that perhaps just might be applicable to a lot of cowboys out there. As I had mentioned to you in a review some time ago, your poetry rings true with me because of my daughter's relationship that she had with a cowboy. You have written some beautiful poetry with this theme. Connie C
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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I really like this poem, which tells a story, one that perhaps just might be applicable to a lot of cowboys out there. As I had mentioned to you in a review some time ago, your poetry rings true with me because of my daughter's relationship that she had with a cowboy. You have written some beautiful poetry with this theme. Connie C
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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thank you connie for the review
Comment from JimLee
This is a heart wrenching story. I think many more people than we realize can relate to this. So often both women and men promise to join an existing life style only to abandon it later, leaving their partner with a broken heart and a shattered dream. Good Writing!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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This is a heart wrenching story. I think many more people than we realize can relate to this. So often both women and men promise to join an existing life style only to abandon it later, leaving their partner with a broken heart and a shattered dream. Good Writing!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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thanks Jim
Comment from JeJo
cowboys heart - cowboy's heart
He feed's the - delete apostrophe
Lifes story is - Life's story is
I like the rhyme scheme and rhythm. The life of a rancher
is clearly described here. His workload, his thoughts, and his life is all laid out in this poem. These were my favorite lines:
"People are like critters, just come and go each day,
Some stay around forever, and some leave that very next day," - JeJo
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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cowboys heart - cowboy's heart
He feed's the - delete apostrophe
Lifes story is - Life's story is
I like the rhyme scheme and rhythm. The life of a rancher
is clearly described here. His workload, his thoughts, and his life is all laid out in this poem. These were my favorite lines:
"People are like critters, just come and go each day,
Some stay around forever, and some leave that very next day," - JeJo
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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thanks for the comments Jejo
Comment from InHisownwrite
Excellent, excellent! This entire piece flows with rhyme and a whole lot of reason.... You take us into another world where some of us are not that familar.... But, now I feel like I understand just a part of the cowboy or rancher's life..... So very well written, from the heart...
Bryan
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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Excellent, excellent! This entire piece flows with rhyme and a whole lot of reason.... You take us into another world where some of us are not that familar.... But, now I feel like I understand just a part of the cowboy or rancher's life..... So very well written, from the heart...
Bryan
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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thank you for your welcome review and comments inHisownwrite
Gary
Comment from Valkarie
I like this because...The rhyme and rhythm flow so well capturing the imagery of the piece which in turn captures the tension. A very visual poem most concise and powerful with an intriguing plot that has a good balance.
This piece is inspiring with impeccable and impressive wording that is creative making this one very good piece of writing.
Valkarie...
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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I like this because...The rhyme and rhythm flow so well capturing the imagery of the piece which in turn captures the tension. A very visual poem most concise and powerful with an intriguing plot that has a good balance.
This piece is inspiring with impeccable and impressive wording that is creative making this one very good piece of writing.
Valkarie...
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2010
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thank you Valkarie
Comment from noland
I almost skipped reviewing this poem, but I'm glad I didn't because when I began reading, it drew me in. It is a moving and enlightening treatment of the daily life of a cowboy. I'm giving it 5 stars because I don't think it needs any revision of the wording---it's wonderful as it is, but there are a lot of grammatical problems. I could help you clean them up, if you like, in private messages. Write on!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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I almost skipped reviewing this poem, but I'm glad I didn't because when I began reading, it drew me in. It is a moving and enlightening treatment of the daily life of a cowboy. I'm giving it 5 stars because I don't think it needs any revision of the wording---it's wonderful as it is, but there are a lot of grammatical problems. I could help you clean them up, if you like, in private messages. Write on!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2010
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2010
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thank for the comments noland i'm not good with the grammer issue
Comment from workout14
TO BE HONEST WITH YOU, I DIDN'T THINK I WOULD LIKE THIS POEM BECAUSE OF THE "COWBOY TOPIC"; HOWEVER, THIS POEM IS REALLY GREAT AND I LOVE THE FLOW TO IT. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. GOD BLESS!
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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TO BE HONEST WITH YOU, I DIDN'T THINK I WOULD LIKE THIS POEM BECAUSE OF THE "COWBOY TOPIC"; HOWEVER, THIS POEM IS REALLY GREAT AND I LOVE THE FLOW TO IT. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. GOD BLESS!
Comment Written 31-May-2010
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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thank you workout
Comment from misscookie
I like the movement of the poem just like the life of a cowboy
It's a simple but truthful . Taking things as the come.
This a a good message for all of us reader.
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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I like the movement of the poem just like the life of a cowboy
It's a simple but truthful . Taking things as the come.
This a a good message for all of us reader.
Comment Written 31-May-2010
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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thank you miss
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Most of us city dwellers do not have the concept of what cowboys can and do live through. I always wanted to live that type of life. Just to be a loner, no one but me to be concerned with or about. Some women aren't suited for this way of life.
Intriguing and very thought provoking piece of cowboy lore.
Great job of bringing this to life..............jim
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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Most of us city dwellers do not have the concept of what cowboys can and do live through. I always wanted to live that type of life. Just to be a loner, no one but me to be concerned with or about. Some women aren't suited for this way of life.
Intriguing and very thought provoking piece of cowboy lore.
Great job of bringing this to life..............jim
Comment Written 31-May-2010
reply by the author on 31-May-2010
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thanks jim
