Those Flying Men
Admiring those flying men at the Olympic Games151 total reviews
Comment from sierra scribbler
This is nice, but it is more like 25 ft. in the air. What a crazy breed of skiers to fly so high.
Great picture.
Good Luck.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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This is nice, but it is more like 25 ft. in the air. What a crazy breed of skiers to fly so high.
Great picture.
Good Luck.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Thank you for commenting and reading this work on those flying men.
Comment from missy98writer
Poet,
This is a perfect Rictameter poem about the aerial skiing at the Olympics. It amazes me what these death defying men and women do in the air. Great photo. Your poem is well written. I love the last four lines the best:
Arms emulating soaring wings.
Poets of gravity,
White grace,
Skiers.
Great imagery for a poem with a restrictive syllable count. A wonderful entry for the writing prompt to write a Rictameter Poem.
Missy.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Poet,
This is a perfect Rictameter poem about the aerial skiing at the Olympics. It amazes me what these death defying men and women do in the air. Great photo. Your poem is well written. I love the last four lines the best:
Arms emulating soaring wings.
Poets of gravity,
White grace,
Skiers.
Great imagery for a poem with a restrictive syllable count. A wonderful entry for the writing prompt to write a Rictameter Poem.
Missy.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Thank you Missy. Those last four lines are taken from my notes while watching this amazing games.
Comment from Soulester
Aren't they just amazing?! flips and twists and splits. They do resemble birds. I really love your last three lines: Poets of of gravity/White grace/Skiers. Beautiful description, that. Mary
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Aren't they just amazing?! flips and twists and splits. They do resemble birds. I really love your last three lines: Poets of of gravity/White grace/Skiers. Beautiful description, that. Mary
Comment Written 24-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Oh yes, I fly, twist, and splits with them. Amazing energy and grace. Thank you!
Comment from patmedium
Absolutely marvellous piece of work... maybe it appeals to me because I am an armchair skier! Congratulations. It flows well as I read it aloud. Pat.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Absolutely marvellous piece of work... maybe it appeals to me because I am an armchair skier! Congratulations. It flows well as I read it aloud. Pat.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Hi Pat, honorable armchair skier. Very smart indeed, staying safe in that chair. Best wishes!
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Hi Pat, honorable armchair skier. Very smart indeed, staying safe in that chair. Best wishes!
Comment from leesm
The Olympics have been great fun to watch this year. Your Rictameter poem is a fun tribute to the aerial free-style skiing, which takes so much talent and so many hours of practice to be able to do at the level of these men and women. I'm glad that someone has written a poem about this. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
-Lee
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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The Olympics have been great fun to watch this year. Your Rictameter poem is a fun tribute to the aerial free-style skiing, which takes so much talent and so many hours of practice to be able to do at the level of these men and women. I'm glad that someone has written a poem about this. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
-Lee
Comment Written 24-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Thank you, Lee. Your review is so inspiring. I wonder if I could copy your comments in my Author's Notes. "a fun tribute to the aerial free-style skiing, which takes so much talent and so many hours of practice to be able to do at the level of these men and women. My best to you skiers!"
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You're welcome. And sure, you can use my comments, if you'd like.
Comment from wholechild
You did a good job with the structure of the poem. I particularly like the line, "Poets of gravity"
The picture is a great match!
Shannon
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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You did a good job with the structure of the poem. I particularly like the line, "Poets of gravity"
The picture is a great match!
Shannon
Comment Written 24-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Thank you Shannon for liking this work on those "poets of gravity."
Comment from Earthlover
This is excellant! Great topic for this contest. The picture illustration is awesome and really adds to the mood of your poem.
I hope you do well in the contest.
Sincerely,
Earthlover
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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This is excellant! Great topic for this contest. The picture illustration is awesome and really adds to the mood of your poem.
I hope you do well in the contest.
Sincerely,
Earthlover
Comment Written 24-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Thank you Earthlover for commenting in this rictameter and for the good wishes.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
I love the grace and motion of this poem that emulates with words the grace and motion of the skiers. Beautiful lines: "Poets of gravity, White grace." This is well done as well as timely. Best wishes to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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I love the grace and motion of this poem that emulates with words the grace and motion of the skiers. Beautiful lines: "Poets of gravity, White grace." This is well done as well as timely. Best wishes to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 24-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Thank you Jeanie Mercer for commenting in this rictamenter and this sports event.
Comment from RebelRose
I can tell what you have been watching on TV lately, LOL. You did a great job with the imagery.
The picture matches the poem very well. Makes a good presentation.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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I can tell what you have been watching on TV lately, LOL. You did a great job with the imagery.
The picture matches the poem very well. Makes a good presentation.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Oh yes, RebelRose, those flying men are so cute. I took lots of notes in between. I was able to assemble them in this rectameter!
Comment from Shirley B
This is a wonderful poem. Your imagery is excellent. 'Soaring wings' is beautiful and an great way to describe many events in the olympics. Good luck in the contest. I think you have a winner here, Shirley
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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This is a wonderful poem. Your imagery is excellent. 'Soaring wings' is beautiful and an great way to describe many events in the olympics. Good luck in the contest. I think you have a winner here, Shirley
Comment Written 24-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Hi Shirly B and thank you for reading and reviewing my prompt.
