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POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES

Viewing comments for Chapter 68 "A Light Bulb Glows"
When I dabble at things.....

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Comment from koyoga
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This is a witty entry into the 'differences' contest.
You make a great statement here that we are all
different - man or woman. Individuality should
definitely be encouraged and celebrated.
Great entry - good luck!

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
    koyoga,

    I am so happy that you recognized what I was trying to say...Everyone has something different to offer to this world of ours...Thank you...Smiles to you,
Comment from el twelve
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that was quite charming and i'm still smiling. the picture
was v ery complimentary. the words few but short and sweet
everything that had to be said was.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
    el twelve,

    Thank you for enjoying and for the kind words....Smiles to you
Comment from Vladilynn
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Smart answer!! first I have to stop and re-read it again. Then I saw the whole meaning!! heee.heeee..just too slow to react~

Love much
Lynn:0)

Good luck!

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 23-Feb-2010
    Lynn

    Thanks for the kind review...I'm glad the light bulb went on...Smiles to you
Comment from kenjac55
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The artwork certainly fits the mood of the poem and the poem certainly tells minor difference between the sexes. I like to think it goes far deeper then your portrayal and that you just scratched the surface.

I would have liked to have seen more creativity reflected in that poetic difference, that common denominator that binds us, which is deeper than what was shown.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2010
    kenjac

    Saying we are totally different except for a minimal of things doesn't seem minor to me....especially with only 25 words to say it. Thanks for the review....
Comment from BethShelby
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This is such a cute and accurate description of men and women. It is so true except for a few exceptions we can't be put in a box and described. We are all different. That how we pee is funny. LOL.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2010


reply by the author on 22-Feb-2010
    Beth,

    Thanks for the wonderful review...I couldn't resist the peeing part...Smiles to you...