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Comment from BJean
I've never been beside someone that was leaving this earth, but this is a very moving s less short story. One last goodbye is what is truly needed sometimes. Good impact with your short story. Love, Jean
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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I've never been beside someone that was leaving this earth, but this is a very moving s less short story. One last goodbye is what is truly needed sometimes. Good impact with your short story. Love, Jean
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2010
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Jean,
I have and I can tell you that you never ever forget those last moments...Smiles, Carol
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I can imagine! Jean
Comment from geoniasha
This is a very beautiful, heart-wrenching piece. I'm sure many of us can identify with the death of a loved one and you've expressed this piece so very wonderfully -- even within the constraints of rigidly structured rules. I admire your skill. geoniasha
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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This is a very beautiful, heart-wrenching piece. I'm sure many of us can identify with the death of a loved one and you've expressed this piece so very wonderfully -- even within the constraints of rigidly structured rules. I admire your skill. geoniasha
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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geoniasha,
Thank you for your most kind and generous thoughts. Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from misscookie
Wow this is a very deep and heary breaking poem
I love the artwok the single rose
to me its like the sinle person who care enough to to take time a prayer with her.
And a child shall lead you.
this is a tear jerker.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Wow this is a very deep and heary breaking poem
I love the artwok the single rose
to me its like the sinle person who care enough to to take time a prayer with her.
And a child shall lead you.
this is a tear jerker.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Cookie,
Monday my daughter's husband lost his grandmother and Yesterday her grandmother on her father's side underwent brain surgery for a hemorrhage. You are reminded how fragile life is...Smiles, Carol
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My, my My I'm sorry for your family lost, my prayers go out for the grand mother having brain surgery. There are no words to say except it's in God and the doctors hand. It msde me think of my Diann . dSo take care my friend remember no one said the road will be easy.
your friend cookie
Comment from lola29
Your entry is sooo sad. Saying goodbye can be so hard. You've done an excellent job of crafting a very poignant piece wihthout using the letter S; very impressive.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Your entry is sooo sad. Saying goodbye can be so hard. You've done an excellent job of crafting a very poignant piece wihthout using the letter S; very impressive.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Lola
On Monday, my daughter's husband lost his grandmother and yesterday her grandmother on her father's side underwent brain surgery for a brain hemorrhage...I called my mom and told her not to move out of the chair until I get there today....Life is a fragile thing...Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ann Smith
I have a friend who is going through this right now with her mother. The doctors keep telling her just another day or two but that was a week ago. It has been an emotional roller coaster for her. This story has a lot of good details even without the letter s. Good job and good luck with the contest. ann
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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I have a friend who is going through this right now with her mother. The doctors keep telling her just another day or two but that was a week ago. It has been an emotional roller coaster for her. This story has a lot of good details even without the letter s. Good job and good luck with the contest. ann
Comment Written 16-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Ann,
Your friend is lucky to have you by her side...Thanks for the kind review. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Summer Falls
This entry has a breathless, yet sad quality about it. I liked it. I would never guess it was for a contest without the letter S. Good job and I wish you the best.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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This entry has a breathless, yet sad quality about it. I liked it. I would never guess it was for a contest without the letter S. Good job and I wish you the best.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Summer
I am honored by your warm and generous review. I thank you very much since this is very close to what is happening in our family at present. Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from Judith Ann
"A tear trickled down her cheek when death entered the room." What a line! I love this work. You have portrayed a death bed scene in a very beautiful manner. Peace and love is everywhere. And to top it off you fulfilled the contest requirement of no "S" anywhere! Nice job --Judy
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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"A tear trickled down her cheek when death entered the room." What a line! I love this work. You have portrayed a death bed scene in a very beautiful manner. Peace and love is everywhere. And to top it off you fulfilled the contest requirement of no "S" anywhere! Nice job --Judy
Comment Written 16-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Judy,
Thank you so much for understanding and enjoying the short story. I appreciate your kind words. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Dustman6180
This is a very good story for only fifty words. And, it has no 'S'. This could very well be a winner. Nice work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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This is a very good story for only fifty words. And, it has no 'S'. This could very well be a winner. Nice work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Dustman,
Thank you so much for the kind and generous review. I appreciate it very much. Carol
Comment from wierdgrace
This was so well written, and the emotional feelings are well felt, thank you so much for this, thank you for sharing, and this is a great entry in this contest, no errors and no revision.s
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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This was so well written, and the emotional feelings are well felt, thank you so much for this, thank you for sharing, and this is a great entry in this contest, no errors and no revision.s
Comment Written 16-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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Wierdgrace,
Thank you for the kind and generous review. I appreciate it very much. Carol
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you are so welcome
Comment from Thesis
This is sad. No matter when a life is extinguished, there is great sadness for those left behind. It's especially sad when it's a family member who passes. "when death entered the room," is a good phrase. - Thesis
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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This is sad. No matter when a life is extinguished, there is great sadness for those left behind. It's especially sad when it's a family member who passes. "when death entered the room," is a good phrase. - Thesis
Comment Written 16-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010
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John,
Monday, my daughter's husband lost his grandmother and yesterday her own grandmother underwent brain surgery. My mother, the only grandmother left, was told to sit in a chair and not move all day until I got there...Thanks for the kind and generous review. Carol
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So sorry to hear that, Carol. My thought are with all of you. - John
