The strength of Love
Loved ones will see us through9 total reviews
Comment from Nicnac
That's the truth!
It is nice to know that family and friends are there for us during the tough times as well as during the fabulous times.
I enjoyed your poem.
Nice presentation. :)
Nic
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2010
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That's the truth!
It is nice to know that family and friends are there for us during the tough times as well as during the fabulous times.
I enjoyed your poem.
Nice presentation. :)
Nic
Comment Written 05-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2010
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Sorry, I am cutting and pasting responses, doing a huge catch-up. I appreciate all the reviews and thank you for taking the time.
Thanks, I appreciate your warm and generous comments.
Warmest regards
Marijke
Comment from Winslow
Dear Poet,
Great picture and your poem makes a true statement. In times of crisis family and friends support does help to pull us through. Good rhyming and structure.
Warm regards,
FS poet
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2010
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Dear Poet,
Great picture and your poem makes a true statement. In times of crisis family and friends support does help to pull us through. Good rhyming and structure.
Warm regards,
FS poet
Comment Written 05-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2010
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Sorry, I am cutting and pasting responses, doing a huge catch-up. I appreciate all the reviews and thank you for taking the time.
Thanks, I appreciate your warm and generous comments.
Warmest regards
Comment from jmdg1954
Very nicely written in a few words...
family and friends are something no one should ever take for granted..
good luck in the contest
John
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2010
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Very nicely written in a few words...
family and friends are something no one should ever take for granted..
good luck in the contest
John
Comment Written 05-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2010
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Sorry, I am cutting and pasting responses, doing a huge catch-up. I appreciate all the reviews and thank you for taking the time.
Thanks, I appreciate your warm and generous comments.
Warmest regards
Marijke
Comment from dragonpoet
Good luck in the contest. This poem tells the truth that we need everyone we love to get us through the rough patches of life.
I see no errors
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2010
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Good luck in the contest. This poem tells the truth that we need everyone we love to get us through the rough patches of life.
I see no errors
Keep writing.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 05-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2010
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Sorry, I am cutting and pasting responses, doing a huge catch-up. I appreciate all the reviews and thank you for taking the time.
Thanks, I appreciate your warm and generous comments.
Warmest regards
Marijke
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Your welcome. Any time.
Joan
Comment from Begin Again
Amen and much more!
I don't think I would be able to pick myself up off the floor any more if it wasn't that my family and friends were there to lend a helping hand..literally!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2010
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Amen and much more!
I don't think I would be able to pick myself up off the floor any more if it wasn't that my family and friends were there to lend a helping hand..literally!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 05-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2010
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Thank you Carol, and yes, they are very special.
Warmest regards
Marijke
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
The poem fulfills the rules of the contest, and the message is excellent. Sounds like this comes from the sweet voice of experience. Best wishes, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2010
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The poem fulfills the rules of the contest, and the message is excellent. Sounds like this comes from the sweet voice of experience. Best wishes, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 04-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2010
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Hi Jeanie, thank you for the compliment, I appreciate it.
Warmest regards
Comment from Dustman6180
A nice six line poem entry for this contest. It reads well and has a powerful message. If I could make one suggestion: I was looking for a "that" in front of Support in order to fininsh the line above it. If the line above were to read: When our lives leave us battered and blue, I think it would flow better. Just my humble opinion. Good luck.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2010
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A nice six line poem entry for this contest. It reads well and has a powerful message. If I could make one suggestion: I was looking for a "that" in front of Support in order to fininsh the line above it. If the line above were to read: When our lives leave us battered and blue, I think it would flow better. Just my humble opinion. Good luck.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2010
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Hi Dustman, thank you for the compliment, I appreciate it. I had 'that' but had trouble reducing it back to nine syllables. I'll have another look. Thanks
Warmest regards
Comment from Gert sherwood
Very nice entry,
and how true starting with God
and going down your excellent list how our loved ones helps us through when we need help.
Gert
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2010
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Very nice entry,
and how true starting with God
and going down your excellent list how our loved ones helps us through when we need help.
Gert
Comment Written 04-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2010
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Hi Gert, thank you for your kind words and generous, I appreciate it.
Warmest regards
Comment from Connie P
So true! The haven of family should be a safe and secure place, a place to find acceptance and forgiveness. This is the case in many families and sadly not in some.
Connie
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2010
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So true! The haven of family should be a safe and secure place, a place to find acceptance and forgiveness. This is the case in many families and sadly not in some.
Connie
Comment Written 04-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2010
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Hi Connie, thank you for your kind words and generous rating, I appreciate it.
Warmest regards