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Tim Gore

Smashed Dreams

17 total reviews 
Comment from MizKat
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I really like your Witty Epitaph. The writing is great and so is the picture. I think you did a fine job on this contest. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 02-Feb-2010
    Thank you.
Comment from Katiesherrill
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I like this entry. Good flow, and rhyme. I love the last line. Now Tim is simply, folklore. You say so much with that sentence. Poor Tim :( Nice contest entry. Good luck

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2010
    You found me. Thanks for the review.
Comment from bkrighter
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This is an interesting epitaph. Since you gave the deceased such a perfect last name, it would have been nice if you had found a way to use that in one of your "or" rhymes. Good luck.

Steve

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2010
    Thanks for the review.
Comment from adewpearl
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What a wonderfully appropriate name this poor guy had :-)
love the rhyme about this guy whose dreams appear to have exceeded his talent :-) I also love the play on saw red :-)
This is a fun witty epitaph with great gallows humor. Brooke

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2010
    Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Scarlettdreams
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Go bull. This is such a barbaric spectacle. I always root for the bull. Go bull! Good luck in the contest with this strong satire. Bravo

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2010
    Thanks so much.
Comment from bookjunkie
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This is a very funny epitaph, sounding like a limerick. The artwork is perfect. You did a good job with your rhymes. Short and snappy! Good job.

Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2010
    Thank you very much.
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
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Nice job! Great presentation...love this entry much. Should do well in the contest. Wish you luck. Hugs and smiles, Susanne

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2010
    Thank you for the wishes and the rating.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
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This is a clever epitaph for the Witty Epitaph contest. I really like the innovative rhymes: "matador...bull once more...folklore." Best wishes, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2010

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2010
    Thank you for reading and for the 'excellent'. I appreciate it.
Comment from Belinda
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Your little fun is witty and humorous. I like your last line most of all: "Now Tim is simply, folklore". Good imagination and clever implementation of the topic.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2010

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2010
    Thank you for your comments and for the excellent rating.
Comment from Kathryn Varuzza
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I like the name you chose.
Good image.
I like a wannabe matador
And your last line.
Good rhymes.
Good luck in the contest.
Kathryn

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2010

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2010
    Thank you, Kathryn. Thank you for the excellent as well.
reply by Kathryn Varuzza on 01-Feb-2010
    You're welcome.
    Kathryn