Comment from jester71

Excellent

This was very well done. A complete thought well expressed and I love the words etched in eternity. There is depth to your short poem which I admire.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010

I appreciate your detailed review and kind comments. :) Thank you, jester.

Comment from Soulester

Excellent

This is the perfect love poem for a valentine contest. Etched in the sand...etched in eternity ...a single heartbeat... you have some excellent imagery in this short poem. Great job! Mary

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010

Thanks, Mary. I appreciate hearing what you enjoyed about the poem. Your review was wonderful. :)

Comment from Peeping_Soul

Excellent

this is awesome,.the picture is amazxing and you have expressed the love in a very touching and emotional way.great write from you

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010

Thank you for a wonderful review. I appreciate you taking the time and I appreciate the kind comments. :)

Comment from fionageorge

Excellent

This is a beautifully worded love poem, and a great entry into the contest.
The words, although simple, have been structured into a lovely masterpiece.
Good luck in the contest.
Warmest regards
Marijke

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2010

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010

Thank you so much for your kind comments and wonderful review, Marijke. :)