Foxtales From The Front Porch
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Staremaster"Stories told from the heart
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Comment from Thomas Raine
I probably would've snorted the coffee out of my nose - some people are just really full of themselves, and this sounds like something out of a parody sketch; must have been a real gem to see.
Thank for sharing!
- TR
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2010
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I probably would've snorted the coffee out of my nose - some people are just really full of themselves, and this sounds like something out of a parody sketch; must have been a real gem to see.
Thank for sharing!
- TR
Comment Written 26-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2010
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Thanks. Actually I was the wise guy who piped up, but it reads better to attribute that to a friend. Besides then I could shift my portlyness to him!
Comment from jayesnb
This was a wonderfully written short story... Jogging can be very dangerous indeed...I cant stop laughing at what happened..great job..i saw no errors..
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2010
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This was a wonderfully written short story... Jogging can be very dangerous indeed...I cant stop laughing at what happened..great job..i saw no errors..
Comment Written 26-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2010
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Thanks. I actually sold this to Big Rapids Biz journal (maybe a new coffee shop was opening up and they needed a promo. Certainly not good for a a gym!)
