POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "Misty morning"When I dabble at things.....
14 total reviews
Comment from Lois Delaney
I really know little of haiku's, so I will give a five star. I know the two first lines are really good. The last one may not be correct, but I am not sure. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2010
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I really know little of haiku's, so I will give a five star. I know the two first lines are really good. The last one may not be correct, but I am not sure. Best wishes!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2010
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Lois
I don't know much about poetry either...Thanks for the comments. Smiles to you...Charlene
Comment from LateBloomer
hello author,
i enjoyed this haiku and the imagery created within.
the poem reads and flows well, has an accurate syllable count, and was a pleasure to read.
good luck in the contest.
regards, latebloomer
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2010
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hello author,
i enjoyed this haiku and the imagery created within.
the poem reads and flows well, has an accurate syllable count, and was a pleasure to read.
good luck in the contest.
regards, latebloomer
Comment Written 12-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2010
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Late Bloomer
I really appreciate the kind review and comments. Smiles to you...
Comment from mermaids
I can see the morning sun rising here. This is a unique haiku that paints a clear picture. You did well with the form and best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2010
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I can see the morning sun rising here. This is a unique haiku that paints a clear picture. You did well with the form and best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2010
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Mermaids
It's so out of my realm of writing, but I hoped that others would enjoy the thought. Thank you for the kind comments. Smiles to you...
Comment from fionageorge
A beautiful haiku, complemented by that beautiful photo. Great imagery within the words.
Good luck in the contest
Warmest regards
Marijke
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2010
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A beautiful haiku, complemented by that beautiful photo. Great imagery within the words.
Good luck in the contest
Warmest regards
Marijke
Comment Written 12-Jan-2010
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Marijke
You are the poet, not me. But I appreciate the kind thoughts. smiles to you...
Comment from el twelve
very nice indeed, the picture and color scheme certainly
complimentary, the words yuo could imagine waking up to
the beautiful sun. thanks
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very nice indeed, the picture and color scheme certainly
complimentary, the words yuo could imagine waking up to
the beautiful sun. thanks
Comment Written 12-Jan-2010
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el twelve
Thanks so much for the kind comments. I really appreciate them very much. Smiles to you....
Comment from MizKat
This is a very nice nature haiku poem. The bright yellow background looks great with the complimentary picture and your wonderful word art. Best wishes to you.
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This is a very nice nature haiku poem. The bright yellow background looks great with the complimentary picture and your wonderful word art. Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2010
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Kat
Thank you so much for the gracious comments. I really appreciate the thoughts. Smiles to you
Comment from Wild Flower
I love that this Haiku shows a little personality! It's wonderful and well- written. This one seems like a winner to me. Great job on it.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2010
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I love that this Haiku shows a little personality! It's wonderful and well- written. This one seems like a winner to me. Great job on it.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2010
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Wild Flower
You've made my day and put a happy smile on my face. I doubt that I would win but it's nice to know that someone thought it possible. Smiles to you,
Comment from AlvinTEthington
Interesting way grammatically to connect the first two lines of imagery by punctuation. Good visual and auditory imagery. I like the vocative nature (which I usually don't, but this is particularly well done) of the satori. Good juxtaposition of picture and poem.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2010
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Interesting way grammatically to connect the first two lines of imagery by punctuation. Good visual and auditory imagery. I like the vocative nature (which I usually don't, but this is particularly well done) of the satori. Good juxtaposition of picture and poem.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2010
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Alvin
Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm not much more than a putter when it comes to poetry..so I am thrilled that you enjoyed it. Smiles to you,
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You're welcome.
Comment from Jean Lutz
Words, art, and color scheme all present nature at her finest. I must add the color adds warmth which is needed in this frigid winter we are having. Best to you with this excellent entry.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2010
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Words, art, and color scheme all present nature at her finest. I must add the color adds warmth which is needed in this frigid winter we are having. Best to you with this excellent entry.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2010
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Jean
Thank you for your most gracious comments. A poet I am not so I am thrilled you enjoyed the poem. Smiles to you,
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This haiku creates a nice little story with a happy ending: "...good morning, Sun!" The presentation is also very nice. Best wishes, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2010
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This haiku creates a nice little story with a happy ending: "...good morning, Sun!" The presentation is also very nice. Best wishes, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 11-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2010
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Jeanie
Thank you so much for the kind words. A few have thought I wa way off and since I don't consider myself to be a poet like you and others..I'm terribly confused. Thanks for the encouragement. Smiles to you