Poems from a Pensive Poet
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Grief"Verses from my heart
42 total reviews
Comment from Justin Chopin
Beautiful poem shelby I thought you did this one very well and thought that the feelings in which you so flawlessly put in about your mother were well written. Keep up the great poetry.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010
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Beautiful poem shelby I thought you did this one very well and thought that the feelings in which you so flawlessly put in about your mother were well written. Keep up the great poetry.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2010
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Thank you, Bozroz, I'm so glad you liked that one.
Beth
Comment from honeytree
Congratulations on winning the contest. I am really pleased for you.Your words written here are brilliant. Time will heal but one doesn't forget. We feel so sad but we have to press on with life. Our loved ones in special ways help us when they are in heaven.
Wonderful loving poem.
Honeytree
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2010
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Congratulations on winning the contest. I am really pleased for you.Your words written here are brilliant. Time will heal but one doesn't forget. We feel so sad but we have to press on with life. Our loved ones in special ways help us when they are in heaven.
Wonderful loving poem.
Honeytree
Comment Written 07-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2010
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Thank you so much for the lovely review. I appreciate the time you took with this.
Beth
Comment from missy98writer
BethShelby,
Your poem is a fantastic tribute to the death of a mother. The title says it all "Grief." I see why it won the sad poems contest. Your meter and descriptive scheme are well written. I liked the fourth stanza the best:
'Yet, no matter where my path would take me,
your devotion encased me like a glove.
There never was a time I felt alone.
There never was a day untouched by love.'
Melissa.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2010
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BethShelby,
Your poem is a fantastic tribute to the death of a mother. The title says it all "Grief." I see why it won the sad poems contest. Your meter and descriptive scheme are well written. I liked the fourth stanza the best:
'Yet, no matter where my path would take me,
your devotion encased me like a glove.
There never was a time I felt alone.
There never was a day untouched by love.'
Melissa.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2010
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Melissa, Thank you so much for the lovely review. I truly appreciate it.
Hugs,
Beth
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Beth,
You have already, and deservedly, won the competition, but I hope my heartfelt praise will still mean something to you. As you may not know, I am not a fan of much except rhyme and metre in poetry and so I find a poem like this particularly entrancingly beautiful. Technically, it is superb and emotionally it is spellbinding.
Regards
Reg
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2010
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Dear Beth,
You have already, and deservedly, won the competition, but I hope my heartfelt praise will still mean something to you. As you may not know, I am not a fan of much except rhyme and metre in poetry and so I find a poem like this particularly entrancingly beautiful. Technically, it is superb and emotionally it is spellbinding.
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 07-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2010
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Reg, Your praise certainly does mean something. You have made it even more meaningful by awarding me six stars. I am overwhelmed by your response. Thank you so much.
Beth
Comment from AnnaLinda
Beth,
This is a most excellent poem and your thoughts within are so honestly written and well composed. It must have been difficult to face these feelings as you wrote this.
These lines stood out to me and you are very blessed:
"There never was a time I felt alone.
There never was a day untouched by love."
Congratulations on winning the contest.
Linda
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2010
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Beth,
This is a most excellent poem and your thoughts within are so honestly written and well composed. It must have been difficult to face these feelings as you wrote this.
These lines stood out to me and you are very blessed:
"There never was a time I felt alone.
There never was a day untouched by love."
Congratulations on winning the contest.
Linda
Comment Written 07-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2010
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Linda, Thank you so much for the lovely review. I so glad you liked it.
Beth
Comment from Adri7enne
This is a lovely tribute to a departed mother. You were much loved and appreciated it. And you realize it's time to move on and to heal. Very heart felt and moving words. Congratulations on winning the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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This is a lovely tribute to a departed mother. You were much loved and appreciated it. And you realize it's time to move on and to heal. Very heart felt and moving words. Congratulations on winning the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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Thank you so much for the lovely review.
All the Best,
Beth
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
This a superb piece of
verse, the choice of words,
both rhythm and rhyme all
flowing smoothly throughout...
even when we expect to lose
a loved one, we are never
prepared when the time comes.
Very impressive - Deserving of six,
but I haven't one I'm sorry to say.
And congratualtions on your win, Beth.
Margaret.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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This a superb piece of
verse, the choice of words,
both rhythm and rhyme all
flowing smoothly throughout...
even when we expect to lose
a loved one, we are never
prepared when the time comes.
Very impressive - Deserving of six,
but I haven't one I'm sorry to say.
And congratualtions on your win, Beth.
Margaret.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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Thank you again, I really appreciate your lovely comments. Ther are especially meaningful coming from a talented poet like you.
Beth
Comment from amel
Dear BethShelby,
I could grab a very deep sorrow in your poem, came from the bottom of your heart. Very well chosen words and line as well, that drew me since the first line of this one." Such as:
"enshrined",
".. I was the only fruit your womb would know"..
lavished tendernes "
"your devotion encased me like a glove."
and this touching line
" which only time may heal but not erase". Excellent! warmly, amel
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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Dear BethShelby,
I could grab a very deep sorrow in your poem, came from the bottom of your heart. Very well chosen words and line as well, that drew me since the first line of this one." Such as:
"enshrined",
".. I was the only fruit your womb would know"..
lavished tendernes "
"your devotion encased me like a glove."
and this touching line
" which only time may heal but not erase". Excellent! warmly, amel
Comment Written 06-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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Thank Arnel, This was a very nice in depth review and I appreciate it very much.
Beth
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You are welcome Beth.The line I was the only fruit your womb would know.. wow !! Big hug, amel
Comment from jlivory
BethShelby,
This is a very nice piece of work and a great tribute to your mother. May she rest in peace and you find solace in knowing she was there for you, as your mother.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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BethShelby,
This is a very nice piece of work and a great tribute to your mother. May she rest in peace and you find solace in knowing she was there for you, as your mother.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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Thank you so much for a wonderful review.
All the Best,
Beth
Comment from smileycloud
hey
good luck in the contest
the storyline flows well and the content is sad but intriguingly real
the personal conversation value personalizes the piece to the reader
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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hey
good luck in the contest
the storyline flows well and the content is sad but intriguingly real
the personal conversation value personalizes the piece to the reader
have a smiley day
Comment Written 06-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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Thank you Smileycloud. I appreciate the review and the good wishes. I shared a first place win in the contest.
Beth
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:) cool :) congrats
