Comment from Dom G Robles

Excellent

Saharice your poem is inspirational. I think it will help to raise your spirit when you are low. Your poem is neat and you have written it well.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2009

Thank you for you so much.

reply by the author on 14-Dec-2009

Thank you for your encouragement, appreciate it.

reply by the author on 14-Dec-2009

Thank you for your encouragement, appreciate it.

Comment from Trybuck

Excellent

I liked your notes almost as well as the poem. Our God will see us through every obstacle that comes our way, for He is strong and mighty. Good one, Buck

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2009

This is just what I feel, the up look is great.

reply by the author on 13-Dec-2009

This is just what I feel, the up look is great.

Comment from peggysis64

Excellent

Beautifully written Sarah. You relay a strong message in such a simple and beautiful fashion. No corrections needed. Enjoyed the read. k

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2009

Thank you for your honest reply, glad you liked my little poem.

Comment from Rogue Rider

Excellent

Very nice little poem. I thought the syllabic sequencing (is that a term?) was very good.

The only little non sequitur to me was the fact that "Our Lord" was referenced on line 3, but then the Lord becomes "Me" on the last line. Could you instead say "through His Word to Him draw nigh?" Then you're maintaining the same perspective.

Just a thought ...

Thanks for a great poem.

Rogue Rider

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2009

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2009

Thank you for pointing this out to me. Appreciate to.