Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Grasping the Spirit's Mystery"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
26 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
Not bad for a second language. I'm interested tp know who you are talking to in this poem. I have had a few poems come to me in the form of a spirit hand guiding my pen.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Not bad for a second language. I'm interested tp know who you are talking to in this poem. I have had a few poems come to me in the form of a spirit hand guiding my pen.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review my poem, really appreciate your input.
I like " form of a spirit hand guiding my pen. Fascinating subject to explore.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
When God's voice speaks, He makes words clear to us. Obviously, this is one of those times. I love the poem and the sweet artwork, one of His glories. Very well-done work and a grace to this site!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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When God's voice speaks, He makes words clear to us. Obviously, this is one of those times. I love the poem and the sweet artwork, one of His glories. Very well-done work and a grace to this site!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your delightful review, all glory to God. The artwork is a picture I took recently. With love and appreciation,
Gb
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A deeply moving and spiritual write filled with faithful sentiments and a true uplifting of the spirit with hope and positivity, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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A deeply moving and spiritual write filled with faithful sentiments and a true uplifting of the spirit with hope and positivity, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderfully written review, It is clearly of the Lord.
With love and appreciation,
Gb
Comment from Cogitator
Spirit fully formed? That would be our bodies, eh? I've referred to my body as temporary housing for years. I'll move to my permanent home when I'm good and ready...John
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Spirit fully formed? That would be our bodies, eh? I've referred to my body as temporary housing for years. I'll move to my permanent home when I'm good and ready...John
Comment Written 18-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your review. Not the spirit but the poem came fully formed. I agree about our bodies being temporary.
Thank God for that! I'm looking forward to a new one!
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How much for a 2BR apt in Iceland?
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Without the blessings of God, not a blade of grass can move. God is always with us to implant hope and to impart hope. We should faith in the Almighty and move on. I liked your beautiful written spiritual poetry. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Without the blessings of God, not a blade of grass can move. God is always with us to implant hope and to impart hope. We should faith in the Almighty and move on. I liked your beautiful written spiritual poetry. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 18-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your beautiful review. Having hope for things to happen creates the faith that can help you to reach a your goals. Faith is the source that fills us with faith and gives us courage instead of fear.
Comment from Sally Law
Welcome to FanStory, judbjorg! It is so wonderful to read your beautiful offering of spiritual poetry. Thank you for sharing your fine talent.
Sending you my best today as always, and best regards for your writing endeavors,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Welcome to FanStory, judbjorg! It is so wonderful to read your beautiful offering of spiritual poetry. Thank you for sharing your fine talent.
Sending you my best today as always, and best regards for your writing endeavors,
Sally :))
Comment Written 17-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review, a real gemstone that lasts forever. With love and kindness,
Gb
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem has a good theme to it. It tells us the faith is a mystery and it is good to follow its laws of helping each other. That we need to follow His plan.
But, I don't like all the reverse grammar to get to the rhyme. It makes the poem harder to read.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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This poem has a good theme to it. It tells us the faith is a mystery and it is good to follow its laws of helping each other. That we need to follow His plan.
But, I don't like all the reverse grammar to get to the rhyme. It makes the poem harder to read.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 17-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2021
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I'm always thankful for any input because that's how we learn. I understand what you mean but this is the way I received it supernaturally but that doesn't mean that its perfect.
With appreciation,
Gb
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None of our poems are perfect. You're welcome.
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None of our poems are perfect. You're welcome.
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Comment from pookietoo
Nice, sounds like you were inspired on what to write. God inspires me on what to write a lot of times. Good luck to you in whatever contest you enter. Keep up the great poetry writing.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Nice, sounds like you were inspired on what to write. God inspires me on what to write a lot of times. Good luck to you in whatever contest you enter. Keep up the great poetry writing.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2021
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Thank you for your great review, and it's true about inspiration. Great review.
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You're welcome. I would appreciate it if you would review my Jessica's Year of Seeing Nature Story and prayer poem.
Comment from Blessings Mirira
I love this poem as it describes the elements involved when there is love between us and the Lord. He sees and knows all that we desire. We may desire and want things forcing ourselves into directions He does not want us to take. If we let Him use us and lead us He will show us the best way.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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I love this poem as it describes the elements involved when there is love between us and the Lord. He sees and knows all that we desire. We may desire and want things forcing ourselves into directions He does not want us to take. If we let Him use us and lead us He will show us the best way.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your beautiful review, it's encouragement to the soul and joy to your soul and spirit. Gb
Comment from SHABAMO
This is a very nice poem, and I would say particularly interesting with your note that it came from the Spirit. It flows very well and is clearly reflective of an author that is close to the Spirit, and listens.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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This is a very nice poem, and I would say particularly interesting with your note that it came from the Spirit. It flows very well and is clearly reflective of an author that is close to the Spirit, and listens.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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This is a great review, and it thrill my heart to read it.nThank you so much for your input.
Gb