Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Just Like a Melody in a Song"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
24 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent poem about talking and listening to God.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Excellent poem about talking and listening to God.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Dear Gypsy, Thank you very much for taking the time to review this poem in such a positive light. I really appreciate it and the rating you gave it. Gudbjorg
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Very well written, Even the few verses rhyme and make a lot of sense. The tone is vibrant and optimistic. The message is clear and positive. Yes, the Lord is our delight!!
Well done!
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Very well written, Even the few verses rhyme and make a lot of sense. The tone is vibrant and optimistic. The message is clear and positive. Yes, the Lord is our delight!!
Well done!
Comment Written 19-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Dear Mario, Thank you for this positive and encouraging review. This little poem seems to be bringing out so much of the positive, even though it's so short! Have a wonderful week! Gudbjorg
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Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is a lovely tribute to our Lord in a short but succinct rhyming poem. The flow works well, like a melody. Inspiration is everywhere, especially with nature and the whisper of wind. I like this poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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This is a lovely tribute to our Lord in a short but succinct rhyming poem. The flow works well, like a melody. Inspiration is everywhere, especially with nature and the whisper of wind. I like this poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review and good rating! I'm so glad you like it and that it has inspired you. I hope you have a wonderful week. Guðbjörg
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a very nice poem. I love the rhyming and the image works well with your words of faith and devotion. It can truly fill someone with delight. Good writng! :))
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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This is a very nice poem. I love the rhyming and the image works well with your words of faith and devotion. It can truly fill someone with delight. Good writng! :))
Comment Written 18-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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Dear Alexandra, I am very happy that you liked my poem and hope it's a blessing to your life. Thank you so much for your review and good rating. Guðbjörg
Comment from jmdg1954
Very nice expression of your faith. Soothing and calm wording from start to end. Thank you for posting and with. Great picture to accompany your prom.
Best of luck to you.
Cheers?
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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Very nice expression of your faith. Soothing and calm wording from start to end. Thank you for posting and with. Great picture to accompany your prom.
Best of luck to you.
Cheers?
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your encouraging review and rating. I hope it gives a different perspective on life. Guðbjörg
Comment from nomi338
His word is truth. In a world and at a time when truth is a diminishing quality, becoming more and more rare by the day. Liars are celebrated for their brash boldness, their defiance of all that is good and right. To be able to read and hear God's word of truth and recognize it as such. It is truly like music, sweet music to our eyes, ears and souls.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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His word is truth. In a world and at a time when truth is a diminishing quality, becoming more and more rare by the day. Liars are celebrated for their brash boldness, their defiance of all that is good and right. To be able to read and hear God's word of truth and recognize it as such. It is truly like music, sweet music to our eyes, ears and souls.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2023
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Your review is such an affirmation of 'turning the truth of God into a lie' as we move into the darkest period before the Lord's Return. It's amazing how quickly the spirit of the world has changed as man turns his back on the God of Love to worship idols and, soon, the Devil himself.
Comment from Brandon Clark
Very clever way to express your faith! The image is great and your word choice is good while it also reads smooth...no choppiness.
Great job!
Brandon
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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Very clever way to express your faith! The image is great and your word choice is good while it also reads smooth...no choppiness.
Great job!
Brandon
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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Dear Brandon, Thanks for your review and rating. Your comments are much appreciated! Guðbjörg
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Dear Brandon, Thanks for your review and rating. Your comments are much appreciated! Guðbjörg
Comment from Ulla
I'm sure it is Gudbjorg, although I can't follow you there. At heart, I'm a non believer and that's just how it is. I do love to read your poetry, though. Thanks for sharing. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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I'm sure it is Gudbjorg, although I can't follow you there. At heart, I'm a non believer and that's just how it is. I do love to read your poetry, though. Thanks for sharing. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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Dear Ulla, No pressure! I'm very glad you enjoy reading my poems, though, and appreciate your frank and honest review and your giving the poem such a good rating. Guðbjörg
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Dear Ulla, No pressure! I'm very glad you enjoy reading my poems, though, and appreciate your frank and honest review and your giving the poem such a good rating. Guðbjörg
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written spiritual poem.a Lovely photo choice to compliment your words as well. Really Nice addition to your book .I like your topic as well.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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This is a beautifully written spiritual poem.a Lovely photo choice to compliment your words as well. Really Nice addition to your book .I like your topic as well.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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Dear Joanne, Thank you for your encouraging comments and review. It is probably the shortest poem I've written, so I've been surprised at the response it has generated. Thanks again. Guðbjörg
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Dear Joanne, Thank you for your encouraging comments and review. It is probably the shortest poem I've written, so I've been surprised at the response it has generated. Thanks again. Guðbjörg
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Your welcome
Comment from Boogienights
That's a song I'd like to hear...what sweet music. I've often felt that in the sounds of nature, he can be heard clearly. This is a wonderful short poem, thanks for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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That's a song I'd like to hear...what sweet music. I've often felt that in the sounds of nature, he can be heard clearly. This is a wonderful short poem, thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for sharing these beautiful words--they would make a part of a lovely poem. Growing up in the rugged beauty of the Icelandic countryside, it always seemed to me that someone was whispering to me, too. God bless you with an inspiring week! Guðbjörg
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Thank you so much for sharing these beautiful words--they would make a part of a lovely poem. Growing up in the rugged beauty of the Icelandic countryside, it always seemed to me that someone was whispering to me, too. God bless you with an inspiring week! Guðbjörg
