Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "The White Fairy"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
27 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The White Fairy, presented in AABBCC rhymed tetrameter sestets, provides a jolt of love and hope that we can all use. Nice.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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This poem, The White Fairy, presented in AABBCC rhymed tetrameter sestets, provides a jolt of love and hope that we can all use. Nice.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your review and good input. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the white fairy that comes to fI'll us with heavenly glow. She makes us smile despite our pains. We all have an inner beauty that will shine when it becomes dark around us.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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A very well-written poem about the white fairy that comes to fI'll us with heavenly glow. She makes us smile despite our pains. We all have an inner beauty that will shine when it becomes dark around us.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I really appreciate your input and reaction to the poem. I love it.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Such a beautiful vision of your girl... you give the reader a overall feeling of wanting to meet her...knowing we may just have one.... all found in a faith that radiates from within!! ;) ;) Thank you for sharing! ;) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Such a beautiful vision of your girl... you give the reader a overall feeling of wanting to meet her...knowing we may just have one.... all found in a faith that radiates from within!! ;) ;) Thank you for sharing! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your beautiful review. Yes, I got this poem just like it came in the spirit without much effort. It is wonderful when this happens for which I'm very thankful.
Comment from royowen
Well done with this dear girl, beautifully written in a very whimsical and yet wistfully upbeat way, as the warmth drips from every syllable and makes one know that they are special to God. I didn't have the writing impetus you had...a writing dad! It was God that lead me, firstly learning music, writing song lyrics to music, at the tender age of late forties. Well done, beautifully written my friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Well done with this dear girl, beautifully written in a very whimsical and yet wistfully upbeat way, as the warmth drips from every syllable and makes one know that they are special to God. I didn't have the writing impetus you had...a writing dad! It was God that lead me, firstly learning music, writing song lyrics to music, at the tender age of late forties. Well done, beautifully written my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for a marvellous review and I find it very encouraging and uplifting to read what you say about my poem. It came to me without much effort of my own, something I can't explain but as supernatural.
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Good post
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A write steeped in fantasy and joy, a world without sorrow is everyone's wish and you painted a glorious wonderland here with the angels, a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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A write steeped in fantasy and joy, a world without sorrow is everyone's wish and you painted a glorious wonderland here with the angels, a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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Thank you much for your wonderful review and insight into the meaning of the poem and its intent. It is always a wonder to me how I got it in the spirit, it came to me so effortlessly.
Glad you liked it. Gb
Comment from Andrewfo
A beautiful, ethereal concept portrayed in a poem with good rhythm and rhyme. There appear to be two different individuals speaking through the poem, each offering a different perspective that leave you feeling you have experienced a conversation in the spirit world. The artwork goes right along with the poem, complementing and enriching it.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
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A beautiful, ethereal concept portrayed in a poem with good rhythm and rhyme. There appear to be two different individuals speaking through the poem, each offering a different perspective that leave you feeling you have experienced a conversation in the spirit world. The artwork goes right along with the poem, complementing and enriching it.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2013
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Very well presented review about the poem and its message that has a deep spiritual value. I really appreciate it. Merry Christmas
Comment from trevorletang
First of all I would like to thank avmurray for the art work as well it is absolutely beautiful. Your poem is well suited to be used for words of encouragement to the broken hearted or those going through difficult times. It certainly touched me.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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First of all I would like to thank avmurray for the art work as well it is absolutely beautiful. Your poem is well suited to be used for words of encouragement to the broken hearted or those going through difficult times. It certainly touched me.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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Thank you so much for your beautiful review, especially thanking avmurray for her part in in by producing such a beautiful picture.
Comment from Siouxsun
The writer has done a wonderful job of mixing fiction with fact. It blended nicely. This has lovely sentiment through the entire piece.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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The writer has done a wonderful job of mixing fiction with fact. It blended nicely. This has lovely sentiment through the entire piece.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2013
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This is one of the best reviews I got for this poem. "Mixing fiction with fact" came to me just naturally but I would like to have a stronger grip on me spelling English. Thank you so much for your great review. Appreciate you.
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I appreciate your appreciation =) Your doing pretty well with English. What is your native Language?
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Icelandic is my mother tongue.
Comment from Nosha17
There are a lot of good fairies out there and we admire their goodness. You have used good rhymes and choice of words. It flows well from beginning to end. Well-written. Faye
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2013
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There are a lot of good fairies out there and we admire their goodness. You have used good rhymes and choice of words. It flows well from beginning to end. Well-written. Faye
Comment Written 26-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2013
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. You made me feel so special.
Comment from Selina Stambi
My heart smiled when I read this. Your friend must be an amazing lady, Sarah. A soul winner? I bet Jesus is smiling too.
What an inspirational poem of encouragement for a special woman.
Love,
Sonali
p.s. I would love to hear a little more about the meaning of my name. xxx
Spags:
Others' hearts (not in others hearts')
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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My heart smiled when I read this. Your friend must be an amazing lady, Sarah. A soul winner? I bet Jesus is smiling too.
What an inspirational poem of encouragement for a special woman.
Love,
Sonali
p.s. I would love to hear a little more about the meaning of my name. xxx
Spags:
Others' hearts (not in others hearts')
Comment Written 02-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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He! Somali. Thank you so much for your wonderful review.I really appreciate it.
Yes, I will send you in another message. Love you!
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Sonal Instructs us in the art of prayer warfare (Jesus:) Today I introduce to you a new helper--one whose command is to teach you more sophisticated prayer skills. This one will instruct you in the art of prayer warfare. Sonale is a master in prayer warfare. She is a bold warrior as she fights with the weapon of prayer. Her skills far surpass that of the conventional. She will teach you how to use the weapons I have given you with greater speed as well as precision. Tune in to her voice and let her instruct you. She will guide you in how to aim your prayers. She will train you in how to project your prayers, how to zero in, shoot, and hit your target right on with greater skill. She will train you in perfecting your aim. She is a master in prayer warfare and will train you in the same. She will help you aspire to master prayer warriors as well--a commission that commands unlimited power. 193. (Sonale:) Call on me, Sonale, when you enter your times of prayer, when you take time in prayer vigil. Call on me to help you to be the prayer warriors that you need to be. When you call on me I am able to instruct you in how to pray, and what types of prayers are needed for the specific prayer requests Sonale, to help you in knowing how to pray and to instruct you in the art of prayer. We are only a few of the host of those who play an active role in helping you to learn the art of these spiritual weapons you have in your hands. So don't fail to call on our help and avail yourself of Heaven's power as we instruct you in their ways. (Jesus:) Sonale will speak in prophecy and give instruction regarding the art of prayer warfare whenever you ask her. But she will also be a ministering spirit who leads through nudges, thoughts, feelings, or her very presence when you call for her to be present during your times of intercessory prayer. So it's good to ask her to speak to you from time to time and help you improve your strategies and techniques. When you have a big need or big request to pray for, you would probably find it helpful to ask her for any specific counsel she might have about praying through that particular miracle. But she's also available for you to simply call on when you enter a normal time of intercessory prayer, and simply through having summoned her (or one of her helpers) and having them present in spirit when you pray, she will make a big difference, for she will nudge you in spirit, remind you of things, and help to direct and influence your prayers so that they are as powerful as possible.
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With much love strong fighter GB
