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Viewing comments for Chapter 61 "When Two Become One"
When I dabble at things.....

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Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Carol,
passion is expressed so well in your poem.
I like the thundering sound and hear trumpets blare.
Must be a great feeling.

Gert

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2009

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    Gert

    Glad you enjoyed the poem..A little reminder once in awhile for days gone by....Smiles, Carol
Comment from jadapenn
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I think I can relate to such a sensuous poem anytime. I loved the use of words in this short poem You have the whole story penned. Good presentation. luv jada

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2009

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    jada

    Not as often as when we were young, but still the same exubriant feeling. Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from adewpearl
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I love the sound pairing of rumbles and trumpets, Carol.
What a great way to describe the passion of lovemaking as the doors of Heaven open to the blare of those trumpets! Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2009

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    Brooke

    Thanks so much for the gracious review. As we age, we don't hear the trumpets as often but they are still appreciated. Smiles, Carol
Comment from melyuki
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Sensational, it is tender, gentle and perfectly tantelizing.
Carol,you never fail to amaze me with your brilliance with the english language. Words blend as beautifully as the scene you describe. lots of hugs for another of your masterpieces. luv Mel


 Comment Written 08-Nov-2009

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    Mel

    How wonderful to wake up and be flattered by ones little sister. The feelings are mutual. Thank you. Carol
Comment from ArtGal
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Wow, this is just a wee bit sexy, lol! Is this a type of poetry form? If not, I enjoyed anyway. The picture is just perfect with your writing, also sexy!

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2009

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    Artgal

    It's a fifteen word love poem...I entered one in the contest and then this one popped into my head so I thought I would post it as well.
    Glad you enjoyed it. Carol
Comment from Belinda
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Carol, you remind me of Hemingway and how he describes love, though of course you do it differently and use different words too. But as expressively, I must say. Wow...

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2009

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    Belinda

    Wow...What can I say...I am so glad that you enjoy what I write and how I write it. No greater praise can I ask for. Smiles, Carol
Comment from missy98writer
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Begin Again,
Your love poem "When Two Become One" is so sexy because of the art work you chose.
I liked the 2nd line the best: "Heaven's doors open and we're finally there.... "
This poem is getting Five stars from me. Keep sharing your great poems and stories. Oops I almost hit the wrong star rating. You got five.
Melissa.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2009

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    Melissa

    Thanks so much for your kind and considerate comments. Glad you enjoyed the little poem. Carol
reply by missy98writer on 07-Nov-2009
    You got 5 stars from me because it was lovely.
    Melissa.
Comment from redglasses
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The great thing about you, Carol, is that the glass is always half full. I love the poem, but just to give you an idea how my peculiar mind thinks, I said to myself, but was that ecstasy together???? I really do think the work is sensitive and well-written.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2009

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    Redglasses

    I give up on you...We just don't seem to think along the same lines. But that's okay. The world is filled with people who are different...makes it a more interesting world. Smiles, Carol
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Comment from lola29
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Ooh la la! Carol, everything you wrote is true. When love finally blossoms, that split second moment is heaven on earth. Very nice!

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2009

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    Lola

    Thank you so much for the compliments and the kind review. Didn't think the old lady still had it in her, but one never knows. Smiles, Carol
Comment from c_lucas
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This is a very well written poem with a smooth flow of words. True Esctasy will always rattle the Gate of Heaven. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2009

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    Charlie

    Thanks for the kind and appreciated words. Smiles, Carol
reply by c_lucas on 07-Nov-2009
    You're welcome, Carol. Charlie