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POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES

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Comment from Irrelevant
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This a very beautiful poem that makes me smile. Your heart shines forth in the words. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem :)

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2009

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    Irrelevant

    Thank you so much for enjoying a poem that means everything to me. A smile that helps me make it through each day. Carol
Comment from TinyTeena
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You have captured a lot in these few words. Your little boy was an angel, a gift from God, you loved him tremendously and always will, the times you spent together, though far too few, remain in your memory, photos and keepsakes you have from the times you shared. Absolutely a beautiful child, a true angel.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2009

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    Tiny Teena

    Thank you for your wonderful and heartfelt words. I really appreciate it. And thank you for admiring his beautiful face...a smile that warms me many a night. Carol
Comment from Realist101
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Hello Carol, I hope I didn't already rate this, but will again, I cannot remember. I love this, and the photo is absolutely perfect. WHat a DOLL. God bless. Susan

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2009

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    Susan

    Thank you for your kind and precious words. I think he is an stunner myself..that smile keeps me going...remembering we will meet again. Carol
Comment from cheyennewy
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Hi Carol...this is such a beautiful poem about your son. I know you miss him terribly and your words are almost too sad to bear. What a beautiful poem and treasured gift. If this doesn't win the contest something is really wrong...good luck....blessings...chey

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2009

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    Chey

    Thank you for your most gracious words. I appreciate your reviews and when you stop by I know you'll make me smile. Thanks. CArol
Comment from Mohubby
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I have a young too and do my best to create memories with him. No one knows when some one you love will be lost or gone away.

Cute kid. Sweet sentiment.



 Comment Written 04-Nov-2009

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    Nohubby

    I can only pray for the day when we will finally be reunited. He was a blessing that I will always cherish. Carol
Comment from words
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Love the photo!

As a mom your words went right to my core.

I especially liked:
God's gift to me,
Our love lives forever

Children are a gift and our love for them is forever!

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2009

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    Words

    Thank you...his smile gets me through every day. Appreciate the kinds comments as always. CArol
Comment from amada
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What a great and mischiveous smile. Your short poem speaks volumes of your love and enlightment. I wish you the very best.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2009

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    Amada

    Yes, his smile won my heart regardless of what he did. Thank you for the wonderful review. CArol
Comment from Lisha L
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This is exceptional. It is emotional and short and sweet. I never knew that I could cry after just four lines but I guess I can. I hope that you will always treasure your son.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2009

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    Lisha

    I am sorry that you cried but I know then that you understand the pain and the love felt by the writer. His smile shines on me every day and I hope one day to see him again. Thank you Carol
Comment from joan marie
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You have been through so much. It shows in your wonderful writing. Also, you have chosed the perfect pen name. Great write. joan marie

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2009

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    Joan Marie

    We each travel a bumpy road called life. I got hit with a few really big pot holes, but I have been blessed as well. Thank you for your wonderful review. Carol
reply by joan marie on 05-Nov-2009
    I understand. I am learning to see the good instead of dwelling on the bad all the time. Can't move forward if I allow the past to shackle me. We must forgive, understand, and move forward with our lives. jm
Comment from Patricia Crandall
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This is a beautiful tribute to your son. It is an excellent entry for the short love contest. It certainly draws on emotions and it presents strong images. An unforgettable poem. Pat Crandall

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2009

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    Pat

    He had an unforgettable smile and because of that I can face each and every day. Thank you for the wonderful comments. Carol