Black-Haired Gypsy Woman
blues lyrics composed by me15 total reviews
Comment from missy98writer
A pretty good five star poem that is like a blues song, I love the blues, it's the foundation for all music types. I could almost hear someone singing the words you wrote.
Peace out ... Bye from missy98writer!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2009
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A pretty good five star poem that is like a blues song, I love the blues, it's the foundation for all music types. I could almost hear someone singing the words you wrote.
Peace out ... Bye from missy98writer!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2009
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Thank you for the encouraging review of my song lyrics.
Comment from angel123
Its a good song! I believe it has real potential to be published. Your lyrics flow and tells your feeling and desire for this blacked-haired gypsy woman. I hope you have the talent to play the instrument and sing the lyrics as well, but if not I am sure you have someone in mind that can express the song the way you intend it to be expressed. Good luck on getting it published.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2009
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Its a good song! I believe it has real potential to be published. Your lyrics flow and tells your feeling and desire for this blacked-haired gypsy woman. I hope you have the talent to play the instrument and sing the lyrics as well, but if not I am sure you have someone in mind that can express the song the way you intend it to be expressed. Good luck on getting it published.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2009
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Thahk you for the awesome review - very encouraging.
Comment from folake
Yeah!yeah!!this must be the work of a very creative person.mystery is your name.i'm a prisoner in this hopeless game..i felt that line..i also love honesty and i think i'm honest with this review.this lyrics is fantastic.maybe i cherish this work 'cos i'm a dark lady or b'cos i'm a lover of country music.the words are like country musicians' lyrics.i love it.cheers
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2009
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Yeah!yeah!!this must be the work of a very creative person.mystery is your name.i'm a prisoner in this hopeless game..i felt that line..i also love honesty and i think i'm honest with this review.this lyrics is fantastic.maybe i cherish this work 'cos i'm a dark lady or b'cos i'm a lover of country music.the words are like country musicians' lyrics.i love it.cheers
Comment Written 10-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2009
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Thank you for the awesome review of my song lyrics.
Comment from jahees
This has a good feel and flow and I think would make a great song. When I read "Hey! Gypsy woman" I am already thinking of the song by that name (shows my age!)The art work you chose goes well with your lyrics. Flows well and good use of rhyming words...it all works together for a good work. Do people take works off here and use them for their own profit and is that why you wrote what you did under "author notes?"
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2009
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This has a good feel and flow and I think would make a great song. When I read "Hey! Gypsy woman" I am already thinking of the song by that name (shows my age!)The art work you chose goes well with your lyrics. Flows well and good use of rhyming words...it all works together for a good work. Do people take works off here and use them for their own profit and is that why you wrote what you did under "author notes?"
Comment Written 10-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2009
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I thank you for taking the time to review my poem.
Comment from Nicnac
Well, this new rule (postings only staying in the inbox for three days) is forcing me to miss some postings, so I thought I'd dig into your portfolio to see what I've missed... ;)
Fayesh, this definitely has the sing-song feel of bluesy lyrics. It's funny how a tune automatically formed in my head. I love the refrain, Hey! Gypsy woman / dark lady... The 'hey!' causes a pause and change of flow - which (in my opinion) a refrain should do. :)
I like how you didn't clutter up the lyrics with punctuation; your capitalized words do well.
No suggestions.
Nic
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2009
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Well, this new rule (postings only staying in the inbox for three days) is forcing me to miss some postings, so I thought I'd dig into your portfolio to see what I've missed... ;)
Fayesh, this definitely has the sing-song feel of bluesy lyrics. It's funny how a tune automatically formed in my head. I love the refrain, Hey! Gypsy woman / dark lady... The 'hey!' causes a pause and change of flow - which (in my opinion) a refrain should do. :)
I like how you didn't clutter up the lyrics with punctuation; your capitalized words do well.
No suggestions.
Nic
Comment Written 10-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2009
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Thank you for taking time to review my work. Cheers for the "gypsy woman" in all of us!
Comment from L.lora
I believe this is the first
of your work that I've had
the priveledge to read and
review. I found your lyrics
interesting and well written,
fitting well into the genre
of the blues.. would be interested
to know if you had a particular
rif in mind when writing them.
Anyway, your words moved this
reader through to the last
word with ease, well done.
no nits.. :)Lora
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2009
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I believe this is the first
of your work that I've had
the priveledge to read and
review. I found your lyrics
interesting and well written,
fitting well into the genre
of the blues.. would be interested
to know if you had a particular
rif in mind when writing them.
Anyway, your words moved this
reader through to the last
word with ease, well done.
no nits.. :)Lora
Comment Written 09-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2009
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Thank you for taking the time to review my song lyrics.
B.B.King's blues style inspired me with meter and words.
Comment from Donald O. Cassidy
This seems to fill the introduction of your poem. Your lyrics seem to measure up to being set to music right well.
If the meaning is abstract (at least to me), that's something of what poetry is supposed to be.
I'm no master at interpretation.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2009
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This seems to fill the introduction of your poem. Your lyrics seem to measure up to being set to music right well.
If the meaning is abstract (at least to me), that's something of what poetry is supposed to be.
I'm no master at interpretation.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2009
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Thank you for taking the time to review my song lyrics.
Comment from Begin Again
Fayesh
Very well done.
Nice choice of words and flows well.
Enjoyed the song and can imagine it to music.
Good luck in the contest.
Carol
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2009
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Fayesh
Very well done.
Nice choice of words and flows well.
Enjoyed the song and can imagine it to music.
Good luck in the contest.
Carol
Comment Written 07-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2009
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Thank you for taking the time to review my song lyrics.
Comment from c_lucas
This is a very well written song with a smooth flow of lyrics. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2009
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This is a very well written song with a smooth flow of lyrics. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2009
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Thank you for taking the time to review my song lyrics.
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You're welcome.
Comment from fionageorge
This is a great little song, simple but effective. I can imagine someone putting this to music. Although it will be blue, I imagine it will be an upbeat blues song. It has that fantastic rhythm about it. Good luck in the voting.
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2009
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This is a great little song, simple but effective. I can imagine someone putting this to music. Although it will be blue, I imagine it will be an upbeat blues song. It has that fantastic rhythm about it. Good luck in the voting.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2009
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Thank you for taking the itme to review my song lyrics.
