Spiritual Oasis
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "He Watches Over Me"a collection of spiritual poems
25 total reviews
Comment from Jasminium
Heartfelt.. well knitted ..thoughtful..thought provoking and a poem of hope..sorry I am falling short of words..but this is so incredible and moving poem ..good luck and keep writing!!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
Heartfelt.. well knitted ..thoughtful..thought provoking and a poem of hope..sorry I am falling short of words..but this is so incredible and moving poem ..good luck and keep writing!!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' He Watches Over Me ', is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a privilege to both read and review a poem of this standard. To me this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
' He Watches Over Me ', is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a privilege to both read and review a poem of this standard. To me this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the exceptional review and the six stars. I am honored.
Comment from royowen
Yes, that the value of trust and belief that God will fulfil all that He promises and that your life won't necessarily be absolved of bad things, but that He is there with you to help with care and wisdom. This is so skilfully written, precise and rhyming so beautifully, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
Yes, that the value of trust and belief that God will fulfil all that He promises and that your life won't necessarily be absolved of bad things, but that He is there with you to help with care and wisdom. This is so skilfully written, precise and rhyming so beautifully, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Roy. This is a chapter in my "Spiritual Oasis" book - there are 7 chapters alltogether. I find them spiritually healing.
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Wonderful book
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for re-posting this contest entry for us. I am sorry I missed it the first time around. I needed to read this poem today so I am especially grateful that you posted it.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
Thank you for re-posting this contest entry for us. I am sorry I missed it the first time around. I needed to read this poem today so I am especially grateful that you posted it.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the great review. I am glad this poem gave you some comfort.
Blessings and love, EM.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I like this...
I pray that you will guide me through the night,
relieve my worries, bring eternal peace,
My wrongs and fallacies you set to right,
my troubled mind and soul you will release.
Lovely poem, well done. Yelena. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
I like this...
I pray that you will guide me through the night,
relieve my worries, bring eternal peace,
My wrongs and fallacies you set to right,
my troubled mind and soul you will release.
Lovely poem, well done. Yelena. Nancy:)
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Sally Law
I am sick for a six to give for this beautiful sacred poem/song. It came at a good time for me as my brother-in-law passed on Monday. It has been most difficult on my only sister. Sending you my best today as always, dear Muse and blessings in Christ,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
I am sick for a six to give for this beautiful sacred poem/song. It came at a good time for me as my brother-in-law passed on Monday. It has been most difficult on my only sister. Sending you my best today as always, dear Muse and blessings in Christ,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Sally. Please accept my deepest condolences on the death of your brother-in-law. I pray that he is at peace and out of pain. I appreciate the virtual six, love and hugs, Muse
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful and hopeful write filled with soothing love and support as we suffer pain in loss and grief and turn to our beliefs to help us, well chosen words, perfect meter and rhyme here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
A faithful and hopeful write filled with soothing love and support as we suffer pain in loss and grief and turn to our beliefs to help us, well chosen words, perfect meter and rhyme here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the great review. Love, EM
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely spiritual meditation and prayer in your well written iambic pentameter lines in abab rhymed quatrain! My favorite was the final verse that takes comfort in the Lord's presence and courage to keep living unafraid of death.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
Lovely spiritual meditation and prayer in your well written iambic pentameter lines in abab rhymed quatrain! My favorite was the final verse that takes comfort in the Lord's presence and courage to keep living unafraid of death.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Helen. This whole book gives me spiritual comfort. Glad it enjoyed this one.
Comment from karenina
I cannot think of a more beautifully spiritual poem than this! So perfect to read on this eve of my surgery! As ever, your writing is impeccable... You pour your heart and soul into your work and it transcends all poetry!
God Bless you! I am certain your parents are smiling down upon you today and always!
It's an honor to call you friend!
Karenina
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
I cannot think of a more beautifully spiritual poem than this! So perfect to read on this eve of my surgery! As ever, your writing is impeccable... You pour your heart and soul into your work and it transcends all poetry!
God Bless you! I am certain your parents are smiling down upon you today and always!
It's an honor to call you friend!
Karenina
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the exceptional review and the six, Karen! Yes, your surgery is today and I pray that it went well. I am glad this poem gave you some spiritual comfort, this whole book (7 chapters) is spiritually healing for me.
God bless and love, Y.
P.S. I will write you in a few days to ask you how it went, give you some time to heal after your surgery.
Comment from Bill Schott
This spiritual poem, He Watches Over Me, is a fine prayer and praise for our God who has protected and guided us all through lives which are made richer with His grace.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
This spiritual poem, He Watches Over Me, is a fine prayer and praise for our God who has protected and guided us all through lives which are made richer with His grace.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Bill.