POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
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Comment from Lainee...
Hi Begin Again,
This sure brought a smile to my face and it sounds like you had fun writing this as song lyrics. I don't think I would like to be the one to have to put this to music though as the the beat is intermittent and a bit all over the place but the humour is all there as are the happy thoughts. A fun read!
Barlee
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
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Hi Begin Again,
This sure brought a smile to my face and it sounds like you had fun writing this as song lyrics. I don't think I would like to be the one to have to put this to music though as the the beat is intermittent and a bit all over the place but the humour is all there as are the happy thoughts. A fun read!
Barlee
Comment Written 27-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
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Barlee
It was only meant to be a silly tune to entertain my fanstory friends and make everyone smile. I think that was accomplished so I am pleased. Thank you for the kind review. Carol
Comment from Sunie617
Wow. This is you fooling around? So cute, so peaceful, and inspirational even in a silly way. I loved it and yes I did get that smile. Thanks.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
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Wow. This is you fooling around? So cute, so peaceful, and inspirational even in a silly way. I loved it and yes I did get that smile. Thanks.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
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Sunie
So glad that you enjoyed the silly song. Thanks so much. Carol
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I'm the one loving your work, thank you.
Comment from Laidy
well, this surely beat the sadness out of the air. i thought you were extremely happy here, this was very uplifting and generrous with smiles. i liked reading and it was nice to have a change from the regular poetry.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
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well, this surely beat the sadness out of the air. i thought you were extremely happy here, this was very uplifting and generrous with smiles. i liked reading and it was nice to have a change from the regular poetry.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
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Laidy
Just something to make everyone laugh and smile. Glad you enjoyed it. Carol
Comment from AnnaLinda
Beong!in Again,
I enjoyed this fun and creative song! It was so fun to see our Fanstory friends in there scrubbing away those blues!
I especially liked this verse: "Gonna wash that mean
Right down the drain. Just smiles of happiness Shall remain."
Keep singing friend!
SweetLinda
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
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Beong!in Again,
I enjoyed this fun and creative song! It was so fun to see our Fanstory friends in there scrubbing away those blues!
I especially liked this verse: "Gonna wash that mean
Right down the drain. Just smiles of happiness Shall remain."
Keep singing friend!
SweetLinda
Comment Written 27-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
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Sweet Linda
That was my favorite line too. Matter of fact, that's how the poem started and it grew from there. Thanks so much for the kind review. Carol
Comment from BPL76
This is a good poem
My favorite line is
'the sun could shine today'
The overall poem is worth the read
The rhymes work well too
It flowed well Good Job
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
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This is a good poem
My favorite line is
'the sun could shine today'
The overall poem is worth the read
The rhymes work well too
It flowed well Good Job
Comment Written 27-Sep-2009
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BPL
Thank you for the kind review. Carol
Comment from Vallachi
This is really cute and has great rythmn. It has a lot of good advice, a little long though but I can see where you were going with it. Good job!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
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This is really cute and has great rythmn. It has a lot of good advice, a little long though but I can see where you were going with it. Good job!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
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Vallachi
Thanks for the kind review. Carol
Comment from Rain Chapman
You were aiming for smiles and you got 'em! I was singing this one - and I don't sing! I recognize so many of the names here and they all must be just tickled to be immortalized by you in such a fun way. I loved it.
Lorraine :)
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2009
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You were aiming for smiles and you got 'em! I was singing this one - and I don't sing! I recognize so many of the names here and they all must be just tickled to be immortalized by you in such a fun way. I loved it.
Lorraine :)
Comment Written 26-Sep-2009
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Lorraine
I am so pleased that you enjoyed this silly song and that it made you smile. Thanks so much for the kind review. Carol
Comment from MaureenLocher
Yep, I have a smile on my face. Thank you. Just what you said - a fun silly poem "for no other purpose than to be silly." We need these every once in a while. Great artwork and even the colors you chose are fun and girly.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Yep, I have a smile on my face. Thank you. Just what you said - a fun silly poem "for no other purpose than to be silly." We need these every once in a while. Great artwork and even the colors you chose are fun and girly.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Maureen
I am so pleased that you found the simple pleasure of a smile in my silly song. I appreciate the kind review. Carol
Comment from kleck140
I was pleased to read your poem after reading a sad one
on the post before. You did bring a smile to me, and I like the silly poem you wrote very much. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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I was pleased to read your poem after reading a sad one
on the post before. You did bring a smile to me, and I like the silly poem you wrote very much. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2009
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kleck
I am glad that I could make you smile and lift your spirits. My day is made with that thought. Sending smiles to you, Carol
Comment from mermaids
This is a fun poem and gives one a good feeling. Who knows?
Maybe you have a popular tune here. Great verses and love the mention of some of our cherished poets! Great work.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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This is a fun poem and gives one a good feeling. Who knows?
Maybe you have a popular tune here. Great verses and love the mention of some of our cherished poets! Great work.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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mermaids
Thank you so much for your kind review. Sending a smile to you, Carol