All in a days work.
Story of a crime scene photographer.27 total reviews
Comment from Mastery
Sad subject,but good coverage in so few words, zee. I think you told us just enough to get the point. Imagine what people in this position must see day after day. Good luck to you. /Seems like you should have won...Bob
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Sad subject,but good coverage in so few words, zee. I think you told us just enough to get the point. Imagine what people in this position must see day after day. Good luck to you. /Seems like you should have won...Bob
Comment Written 23-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Thanks much Bob. You are such a nice guy.. sigh... Zee
Comment from WRITER1
A very good piece. I enjoyed reading it and believe you have a real good shot at the contest. I always like to read your work. Money isn't everything but it helps.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2009
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A very good piece. I enjoyed reading it and believe you have a real good shot at the contest. I always like to read your work. Money isn't everything but it helps.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2009
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Thanks much, Writer1. I appreciate your reviewing. Zee
Comment from Nicky B
I particularly liked the last line in this little ditty. You did well encapsulating the story with the limitations that were put upon you. Love much. Nick.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2009
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I particularly liked the last line in this little ditty. You did well encapsulating the story with the limitations that were put upon you. Love much. Nick.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2009
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Thanks honey. Zee
Comment from Cooper Watt
Cool story, Zee. I mean, it's cool that you were able to fit the appointed words inside the word count without it seeming forced.
Well done kiddo. Good luck!
Coop.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Cool story, Zee. I mean, it's cool that you were able to fit the appointed words inside the word count without it seeming forced.
Well done kiddo. Good luck!
Coop.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Thanks hon. Zee
Comment from Judian James
Hey there! It's good to read something from your pen!!
I gotta tell you, and I would want the same honesty from you, without the description above the title, I would have been completely lost. With the "crime scene photographer" provided, it was an excellent write. Did that make any sense? HOW ARE YOU?
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Hey there! It's good to read something from your pen!!
I gotta tell you, and I would want the same honesty from you, without the description above the title, I would have been completely lost. With the "crime scene photographer" provided, it was an excellent write. Did that make any sense? HOW ARE YOU?
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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I'm better. Just had a test today. All's well that ends well. Thanks for the review, sugar foot. Zee
Comment from sfharper
I was lost by Mr. Faulkner but after reading it several times I gathered he'd killed his family and the couple were unhappily witnesses, maybe cops or something. I can see reason in it and agree wholeheartedly with that drink. Sad, but well written.
:)
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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I was lost by Mr. Faulkner but after reading it several times I gathered he'd killed his family and the couple were unhappily witnesses, maybe cops or something. I can see reason in it and agree wholeheartedly with that drink. Sad, but well written.
:)
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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It was a stretch for me to tell a story, include words and be held to 150 words. Thats what writing prompts are all about. I now wish I could have a do-over. LOL.. thanks for the review. Zee
Comment from Slush Pile
Very good story for the contest. The mandatory words were very difficult to work with. I have only one line to remark about:
As written: "Must be nice to have money," she thought as she searched the sky for a cloud.
[Quotation marks are NOT used for internal monologue, Italic type is.]
I do not deduct stars for punctuation errors, thus the five. The story is excellant and well deserving of recognition. Good luck in the contest, Slush Pile
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Very good story for the contest. The mandatory words were very difficult to work with. I have only one line to remark about:
As written: "Must be nice to have money," she thought as she searched the sky for a cloud.
[Quotation marks are NOT used for internal monologue, Italic type is.]
I do not deduct stars for punctuation errors, thus the five. The story is excellant and well deserving of recognition. Good luck in the contest, Slush Pile
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Thank you much Slush Pile. I hope I can remember your point of using Italic type. Thanks much. Zee
Comment from rama devi
A good entry for the contest, Zee Zee. Well written and free of spag. Descriptive enough to make the scene alive even in a short time.
I see nothing to change.
Good job.
Warmly,
rd
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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A good entry for the contest, Zee Zee. Well written and free of spag. Descriptive enough to make the scene alive even in a short time.
I see nothing to change.
Good job.
Warmly,
rd
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2009
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Thank you much Rama. Zee
Comment from SherryHo
An absolutely fascinating story in so few words. I enjoyed this very much, but then I'm a sucker for crime stories. This is written very well, staying within the guidelines and using all the list of words. Great job! Good luck, i think this is a winner.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2009
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An absolutely fascinating story in so few words. I enjoyed this very much, but then I'm a sucker for crime stories. This is written very well, staying within the guidelines and using all the list of words. Great job! Good luck, i think this is a winner.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2009
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Thank you for reading and reviwing, SherryHo. You have the most adorable name. Thanks. Zee
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
Sorry but true that even riches cannot buy happiness.
You have used the required words, to tell this succinct story, with a kernal of wisdom.
Good luck in the contest.
Juliette
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2009
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Sorry but true that even riches cannot buy happiness.
You have used the required words, to tell this succinct story, with a kernal of wisdom.
Good luck in the contest.
Juliette
Comment Written 22-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2009
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Thanks much for reading and reviewing. Zee
