The World According to Yoda
anti war/terrorism poem written as Yoda speaks29 total reviews
Comment from jwsteele
I kind of got lost with the first line. But the rest of the poem flowed well. The artwork does not show up on my screen, (just thought you'd like to know)
You've got some keenly distressing lines in this poem.
Terrorism is not the way
In words not violence. His thoughts he should portray
Amen
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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I kind of got lost with the first line. But the rest of the poem flowed well. The artwork does not show up on my screen, (just thought you'd like to know)
You've got some keenly distressing lines in this poem.
Terrorism is not the way
In words not violence. His thoughts he should portray
Amen
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the review. I think the artist removed the art from the site. When that happens the artwork doesn't show anymore.
I will have to go and find new artwork
Joan
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned from the viewpoint of Yoda. You used very good descriptive words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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This is a very well written poem you have penned from the viewpoint of Yoda. You used very good descriptive words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind words and high rating, Teri.
Happy Holidays
Joan
Comment from RGstar
Need a little editing here Joan, but your words leave no thoughts untouched by the meaning of peace.
Positive wording, yet still we hope.
My best wishes Joan.
Have a pleasant week.
RG
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Need a little editing here Joan, but your words leave no thoughts untouched by the meaning of peace.
Positive wording, yet still we hope.
My best wishes Joan.
Have a pleasant week.
RG
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Roy,
Thank you very much for the review.
Happy Holidays.
Joan
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Your artwork is missing, Joan.
-Sometimes the artist pulls their work.
-You did a good job with Yoda speak
to reflect feelings about the state of things.
-Two of my favorites are the first two lines.
-I also like "Understand the Force. No person can."
-Good concluding lines, too.
-Have a good Thanksgiving.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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-Your artwork is missing, Joan.
-Sometimes the artist pulls their work.
-You did a good job with Yoda speak
to reflect feelings about the state of things.
-Two of my favorites are the first two lines.
-I also like "Understand the Force. No person can."
-Good concluding lines, too.
-Have a good Thanksgiving.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the review, Pam. I am glad you liked it.
Happy Thanksgiving
Joan
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You are welcome, Joan. I appreciate your reply.
Comment from Tina Crute
One question...Did you mean...He has in HIS sight?( Might just be me,lol!
Memorable poem, very unique and interesting!
It took me a second to adjust to the way Yoda talks, but it was a fun adventure! There is some deep stuff here!
Example...
No man can understand the force if violence is the language.(If I read that right!)
Well done. Thanks for sharing something different!
Tina
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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One question...Did you mean...He has in HIS sight?( Might just be me,lol!
Memorable poem, very unique and interesting!
It took me a second to adjust to the way Yoda talks, but it was a fun adventure! There is some deep stuff here!
Example...
No man can understand the force if violence is the language.(If I read that right!)
Well done. Thanks for sharing something different!
Tina
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thank you, Tina. I will check out the mistake and make the edit.
Joan
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Welcome! I liked this!
Tina
Comment from Terry Broxson
Very creative. Hard to argue against the logic of the message. You have done a good job of giving new voice to Yoda in our perilous times. Too bad he will not have a large audience of acceptance. Good Work.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Very creative. Hard to argue against the logic of the message. You have done a good job of giving new voice to Yoda in our perilous times. Too bad he will not have a large audience of acceptance. Good Work.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thanks, Terry, for reading and reviewing my poem.
Joan
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Amen and amen - this is so great and absolutely Yoda! You have done a great job of giving us another look at what should be. We are heading for a civil war in America and I dread the consequences. Why at peace we cannot be?
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Amen and amen - this is so great and absolutely Yoda! You have done a great job of giving us another look at what should be. We are heading for a civil war in America and I dread the consequences. Why at peace we cannot be?
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem. Sherry. Glad you liked it.
Joan
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Liked it greatly, I did!!
Comment from mermaids
I am a Yoda fan and your words sound exactly like him. The message of peace is clear and Yoda is for peace. The beat of your words sound like Yoda's voice. Excellent poem about world peace from a beloved character. Your poem is creative and unique.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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I am a Yoda fan and your words sound exactly like him. The message of peace is clear and Yoda is for peace. The beat of your words sound like Yoda's voice. Excellent poem about world peace from a beloved character. Your poem is creative and unique.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thanks. I am glad you liked it. It was fun to right.
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The world is in a state of confusion just now with recent events and we are only just keeping the lid on the violence that could become worse. A poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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The world is in a state of confusion just now with recent events and we are only just keeping the lid on the violence that could become worse. A poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you for the nice review.
Joan
Comment from Boogienights
A fellow Star Wars fan? Yoda speaks words of wisdom, which you have written into this well written poem. I agree with all you say, that violence is definitely not the way to go. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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A fellow Star Wars fan? Yoda speaks words of wisdom, which you have written into this well written poem. I agree with all you say, that violence is definitely not the way to go. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thanks fo reading and reviewing this poem. I am glad you liked it.
We are here to shar.
Joan
