Comment from HDycha

Good

This is absolutely hilarious. I had a trouble-making dog who was also maced by the mailman and kept advancing. She was (if you can believe this), part golden retriever and part dachshund. I had to laugh at the part about Grandpa being pulled along by his unruly hound.
I think that you could expand on this a bit. Tell us some more about Buster's adventures, I'd certainly love to read about them.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2009

thanks. More about Buster; check out 'The A Team Cake' in my prior portfolio (All)

Comment from eliz100

Excellent

You have written an amusing story and I have enjoyed reading it. Your words painted pictures that I imagined while I was smiling.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2009

thanks. More about Buster; check out 'The A Team Cake' in my prior portfolio (All)

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is a very well written story with a humorous overtone. It has a smooth flow of words. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2009

thanks. More about Buster; check out 'The A Team Cake' in my prior portfolio (All)

reply by c_lucas on 18-Sep-2009

You're welcome.