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When I dabble at things.....

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Comment from AmberRose
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Ha! I like this. Touche... and sometimes how I feel (justplaying... kinda) quick poem that was enjoyale to read. thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 31-Jul-2009
    AmberRose..Thank you so much...it was just a silly suck up poem for a silly contest. Makes you laugh so you can write some more. Thanks for the review. CArol
Comment from Dave-Aranda-Richards
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Well you got my attention! Hmmmm, not necessarily in that order though. Don't know what else to say but if I stop now the critique (critique?) won't be accepted.

Dave

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 26-Jul-2009
    Dave... I have been blushing every since I posted that little ditty. Thank you for your comments...I think! Carol
reply by Dave-Aranda-Richards on 26-Jul-2009
    Don't worry...I don't even know what I meant.

    Dave
Comment from Nicnac
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LOL
This is fabulous!
I love the witty take on this prompt.
This is a great (and fun) suck-up. :)

Best wishes, Begin Again!
(Still laughing)
Nic

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2009
    Nicnac.. Thanks for the kind review. Carol
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
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Now that's a promise heard over and over again. This is a great suck-up, my friend. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest. I'm sure you will do well.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2009
    El Gato Thank you for your kind review. Everything is said in jest! Thanks again Carol
Comment from WRITER1
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How I guess you really want a vote. This is a good entry for the contest. I have read all of them so far and you have made the best offers.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2009
    Writer1...Thanks for the kind review. All is said in jest! Thanks again Carol
Comment from bkrighter
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That is quite an offer, one I would be hesitant to make. It rings of deesperation, bravado, or maybe naivete. Quite an offer. I wish you well in the contest.

Steve

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2009
    bkrighter....I assure you I am neither desperate, naive or full of bravado. It was a said in jest. Totally out of character. Thanks for reading. Carol
Comment from babylonia
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LOL so hilarious but maybe true in some places. LOL i can see it now. you gave how many member pumps to xyz?
imagery is excellent.
good luck~
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2009
    Barbara

    Thanks for the review. I greatly appreciate it. Carol
reply by babylonia on 25-Jul-2009
    carol,
    you are welcome~
    love,
    barbara
Comment from nora arjuna
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LOL, now that's really a bold one. I'll choose money over everything!

great suck-up lines. having fun reading all these so far. all the best!

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
    arjuna Thanks for the review. Greatly appreciate it! Carol
Comment from Annelisa
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Well okay then. That works for me. Thr trouble is, now I have to decide which one I want most of all. hmmmm..... I just don't know.

Very clever and good luck!

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
    Annelisa Thanks for the review. I greatly appreciate it! Carol
Comment from Blaidd Drwg
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Carol very clever thought expressed in so few words. Yes, it is one of the naughty ways to win, but usually the payoff is short lived.

John

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2009

reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
    John Thanks for the review. I'm glad this was all said in jest because it certainly doesn't sound like me. Carol