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Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Our Tomorrows Will Never Come"
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Comment from sherrymccall
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Hello again my friend. This is such a powerful,and touching message tucked inside so few lines. You were able to relate so much. I feel your pain and you are an awesome writer to be able to tell so much in very little words. Keep up the awesome work. I also love the picture you used with this.

 Comment Written 12-Jul-2009

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    Sherry..

    This one was written with my son, Michael, in mind. Thank you again for your kind thoughts. Carol
Comment from GABSTBOZ
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Hi Begin Again
C. "Our Tomorrows Will Never Come" fills the well with tears. "tiny shoes ,tucked away" I can't imagine this pain but my tears flow.

Your son and grandchild are smiling up on you always
Gabor

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2009

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    Gabor...

    Thank you ever so much. I wrote that when I was having an exceptionally difficult day. Friends helped me through it. Thanks for your kind words. Carol
Comment from dportwood
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Begin Again,

There seems to be a sadness and aloneness woven within the words of this poem. I wonder if he is grown and gone, perhaps in the military?

Duane

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2009

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    Duane...

    This was for my little boy that died. He was four years old.

    Thank you for asking though. Your thoughts are appreciated.

    Carol C
Comment from S.Yocom
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These few words tell a heartbreaking story, Begin Again. You leave it up to the reader to decide if the child has passed away or is now grown and has gone to live his own life. Either way, I feel the sadness that you present in this poem.
Sally

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2009

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    Sally...

    Thank you for your kind comments. It was written on a bad morning when I was thinking about my four year old son when he died. It was a long time ago but some times it feels like yesterday. Thanks again Carol
Comment from Kingsland
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tomorrow never really does come as its always just a day away. I enjoyed this ultra short poetic art form.There was nothing to dislike about it.It was just a delight to have written a review for... John

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2009

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    John....

    Thank you for your kind remarks. Sorry it took me so long to get back, I was out of town.

    Thanks again - Carol C
Comment from jwryt
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this is rather a lonely poem here..i had questions so i read your profile..i'm sorry 'bout your son and your grandson..i believe they're happy wherever they are..i also do believe you're also a great mother and a good person..thanks for sharing this one..

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2009

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    Thank you for your kind remarks. I apologize for not getting back to you but I was out of town. I appreciate you reading and replying. Thanks again Carol
Comment from fictionwriter
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I was cleaning out my sons toybox. He's 23, but I still have all the stuff he played with as a kid. It brings back all the good memories, but it's sad to not have that anymore. Great poem.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2009

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    Fictionwriter...

    Thank you for your kind remarks. I apologize for not replying sooner but I was out of town. Thanks again Carol
Comment from Kristia
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Hi Carol,

I send out a hug to lift you up. I can only imagine just how hard it is to be missing him. Your poem is a lovely tribute. I can just see his tiny shoes. God bless you and keep you my friend.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2009

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    Kristia...

    Thank you for the hugs and best wishes. I am sorry that I was out of town and couldn't respond to you sooner. Thanks so much. Carol
Comment from lizziebach
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This is such a sad moving poem, you've managed to pack so much emotion into a few words. I love the alliteration in the first line and it ties in nicely again with the teardrops in the last line. So sad, you have all my sympathies.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2009

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    Lizziebach...

    Thank you so much for your encouragement and kind comments. I greatly appreciate them. Your friend, Carol
Comment from Diny
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Very sad- but well crafted poem- It is hard to touch someone with so few words- but you managed it very nicely! Write on- DINY

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2009

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    Diny...

    Thank you for your kind words. They are greatly appreciated. Carol