Comment from RenieReader

Excellent

Oh, Jani, how I love your heart and concern for others. You know where to turn and He is always there--especially when He knows your sincerity. You are wise to listen to His advice. Thank you for sharing.

Milking goats takes forever some days, or so it seemed. (Not sure if 'seemed' should be 'seems' to go with 'takes' or not.)

Jesus followed my daughter's favorite goat, Brownie[,] out of the milking parlor into the barn.

Luv ya,
Renie

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2009

Thanks, Renie. I fixed the comma. I'm still trying to decide how to fix that sentence. :-) I so appreciate your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed reading this one.
Hugs,
Jani

Comment from jgaman

Excellent

This is a very nice piece. Where did you find that picture of Jesus' hand holding a fetus? Nice touch.

This is so true:
"More than you will ever know, child. Think, little one. How many times have I reached out to you through My other children? You must remember, though, as much as you care for them, you can't carry their burdens either."

Maybe one of the hardest lessons to learn in life.



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 Comment Written 13-Jun-2009

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reply by the author on 13-Jun-2009

Thanks for the review. :-) I found the artwork on FanArtReview.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Jani