A Lasting Peace Without the Tears
Viewing comments for Prologue "Towards a lasting peace!"Simply my feelings towards a lasting one.
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Comment from nora arjuna
Hi mike, a lot have been written, not to mention being spoken and shouted out about world peace. Yet nothing much has changed. It would be easy if all were to hold peace in their hearts, but unfortunately some don't. I'm thankful to be living here in my country.
reply by the author on 22-May-2009
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Hi mike, a lot have been written, not to mention being spoken and shouted out about world peace. Yet nothing much has changed. It would be easy if all were to hold peace in their hearts, but unfortunately some don't. I'm thankful to be living here in my country.
Comment Written 22-May-2009
reply by the author on 22-May-2009
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Not only hold it in our heart's but fit it into our lives. It seems to me a little more common sense, a little less pride and hatred and also a sense of the future benefits or living together. I like you country and have met a few people from it, they had a Bizarre Foods show about Singapore. He fings those foods everywhere. Have a great weekend! Mike
Comment from adewpearl
sting these writings like a strand string these
materials presented, are various drop the comma
These little factions, try to gain drop the comma
have perished they the rest of the world than the rest
Everything I have hear outside heard
helping Iraq and A rise up as a country they are two countries
today's potential weapons add apostrophe
loose fear lose
more then a fleeting second than
Mike, it sounds like your poems will be thoughtful and meaningful - I just lost concentration reading this prologue because I was scrolling back and forth to make corrections. Brooke
reply by the author on 19-May-2009
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sting these writings like a strand string these
materials presented, are various drop the comma
These little factions, try to gain drop the comma
have perished they the rest of the world than the rest
Everything I have hear outside heard
helping Iraq and A rise up as a country they are two countries
today's potential weapons add apostrophe
loose fear lose
more then a fleeting second than
Mike, it sounds like your poems will be thoughtful and meaningful - I just lost concentration reading this prologue because I was scrolling back and forth to make corrections. Brooke
Comment Written 19-May-2009
reply by the author on 19-May-2009
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Well, I not only made all of the suggested corrections, but found a couple more. Straight writing is unfortunately my strongpoint to begin with. I was not only hesitent about puting all of these in a book, I had the attitude of just get er done and was very tired. I find that reading writing is a double duty as one has to look for corrections to make, then ignore them to judge the content. I really wished that I could post these with a better pay out. I thank you so very much for helping me with mine and I do appreciate both the work and the compliments.
With love, Mike
Comment from andyangel
this author needs a profreader or an editor misspellings and grammar errors need to be fixed in this work the thought expressed are visionary and creative I realy enjoyed this message
reply by the author on 19-May-2009
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this author needs a profreader or an editor misspellings and grammar errors need to be fixed in this work the thought expressed are visionary and creative I realy enjoyed this message
Comment Written 19-May-2009
reply by the author on 19-May-2009
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No, the author needs some rest before he reads this, thank you for the compliments. I knew I should have used word.
