CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from Freeflyer
Another great poem of yours. This one sure raises a few questions about the big bang. I believe our Father created everything, even the big bang. Good work and good luck in the competition.
Freeflyer
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Another great poem of yours. This one sure raises a few questions about the big bang. I believe our Father created everything, even the big bang. Good work and good luck in the competition.
Freeflyer
Comment Written 05-Apr-2009
Comment from honeytree
I felt the writer's words are brilliant here and the art work is so strong and creative.
I feel God is behind the "Big Bang" and I will always feel this way.
Honeytree.
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I felt the writer's words are brilliant here and the art work is so strong and creative.
I feel God is behind the "Big Bang" and I will always feel this way.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2009
Comment from Rottie
Ah yes, the big bang or God. This has been argued by both sides forever. Your picture of storminess seems fit to this piece. It is what you believe it is. We will not know until we are no longer in human form. Nice poetic piece.
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Ah yes, the big bang or God. This has been argued by both sides forever. Your picture of storminess seems fit to this piece. It is what you believe it is. We will not know until we are no longer in human form. Nice poetic piece.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2009
Comment from Just2Write
Wow - loved the argument presented here. One atom, One God. Or, one God - one Adam. The atom theory with its Big Bang is still a conumdrum. Where did that atom come from and who made it? It's all a mystery to me, and frankly, it is to all them big whigs that postulate that they know everything. Rose
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Wow - loved the argument presented here. One atom, One God. Or, one God - one Adam. The atom theory with its Big Bang is still a conumdrum. Where did that atom come from and who made it? It's all a mystery to me, and frankly, it is to all them big whigs that postulate that they know everything. Rose
Comment Written 04-Apr-2009
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Sixteezkid
A great thinking clarity poem entry
I have no doubts like you said - One God
the best to you and take care.
Gert
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Hello Sixteezkid
A great thinking clarity poem entry
I have no doubts like you said - One God
the best to you and take care.
Gert
Comment Written 04-Apr-2009
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
You know, mainly through your own creations, and also Adewpearl's I have come to learn about all different types of poetry since I've been with FanStory. You seem to have a particular talent at fulfilling extremely difficult criteria to create a masterpiece. This is fabulous. Wish I had a six to give you!
Warmest wishes
Kat
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2009
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You know, mainly through your own creations, and also Adewpearl's I have come to learn about all different types of poetry since I've been with FanStory. You seem to have a particular talent at fulfilling extremely difficult criteria to create a masterpiece. This is fabulous. Wish I had a six to give you!
Warmest wishes
Kat
Comment Written 04-Apr-2009
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2009
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Kat, your compliments go right to my heart. I, too, became so inspired by some writers here and it has been such a fulfilling thing to learn these various forms. Your review is like a "10" for me!!! Thank you so much! Sue :-))
Comment from c_lucas
The question is: Did God create man, or did man create God? A very thought-proking poem that makes for a smooth read. Good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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The question is: Did God create man, or did man create God? A very thought-proking poem that makes for a smooth read. Good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2009
Comment from tammipratt
Great work at this form of poetry. I think you've done a very good job.
Good analogy here and I thought your conveyed your message well as a result.
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Great work at this form of poetry. I think you've done a very good job.
Good analogy here and I thought your conveyed your message well as a result.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2009
Comment from Stephen C Winter (Vs
Dear Sixteezkid,
I thought a very well constructted piece here, if it is for a contest I am sure it will do very well.
The big bang and god, a question I often ask and do think perhaps both can sit side by side.
Kind regards
Steve
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Dear Sixteezkid,
I thought a very well constructted piece here, if it is for a contest I am sure it will do very well.
The big bang and god, a question I often ask and do think perhaps both can sit side by side.
Kind regards
Steve
Comment Written 04-Apr-2009
Comment from zocalo
Wonderful Clarity Pyramid. I thought of using the 'Big-Bang' myself. You're gonna be tough to beat. I love the last line too. Good luck in the contest.
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Wonderful Clarity Pyramid. I thought of using the 'Big-Bang' myself. You're gonna be tough to beat. I love the last line too. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2009