CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from jack silver
everyone has a family member they confide in. for me it is my little sister who looks up to me with only kindness. she is precious just like her other two brothers. they along with my love Nattily who is my heat and has agreed to marry me have really given me a life that is a pleasure to live in.
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everyone has a family member they confide in. for me it is my little sister who looks up to me with only kindness. she is precious just like her other two brothers. they along with my love Nattily who is my heat and has agreed to marry me have really given me a life that is a pleasure to live in.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2009
Comment from honeytree
Wonderful letter to your sister and being close you have so much to share. One can trust our sister and tell her what can be on ones mind.
Growing up together we know each other so vey well.
Sisters are special and I have one, we chat on the phone
she lives interstate. We see her and her husband and her family when we can.
Great writing.
Honeytree.
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Wonderful letter to your sister and being close you have so much to share. One can trust our sister and tell her what can be on ones mind.
Growing up together we know each other so vey well.
Sisters are special and I have one, we chat on the phone
she lives interstate. We see her and her husband and her family when we can.
Great writing.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2009
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
Brilliant, as usual. I can't find anything negative at all to say - I rarely can when I read things you've written. All I will say is this: I think Debbie has an incredibly talented sister! I hope she liked the poem too.
All the best.
Kat
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Brilliant, as usual. I can't find anything negative at all to say - I rarely can when I read things you've written. All I will say is this: I think Debbie has an incredibly talented sister! I hope she liked the poem too.
All the best.
Kat
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from bard owl
What a wonderful tribute to your older sister. I have an older sister, but we are not close. I do have a brother that I share the good times and bad with and he is one of the lights and delights of my life. Your poem is one I can identify with. You have written with such love. Hope your sister gets to read this one. Blessings to you, Linda
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What a wonderful tribute to your older sister. I have an older sister, but we are not close. I do have a brother that I share the good times and bad with and he is one of the lights and delights of my life. Your poem is one I can identify with. You have written with such love. Hope your sister gets to read this one. Blessings to you, Linda
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from womanwriter
What a wonderful way to say "I Love You" to a sister.
I wish that I had told my sister how very much I love(d) her before she was murdered.
I especially like the line; Our love is unconditional...there is no, "it depends"
Thanks for writing this - it has special meaning to me, someday maybe I'll understand life a little better. In the meantime you have turned over yet another piece of the 'puzzle' that is my life.
Sincerely,
womanwriter
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What a wonderful way to say "I Love You" to a sister.
I wish that I had told my sister how very much I love(d) her before she was murdered.
I especially like the line; Our love is unconditional...there is no, "it depends"
Thanks for writing this - it has special meaning to me, someday maybe I'll understand life a little better. In the meantime you have turned over yet another piece of the 'puzzle' that is my life.
Sincerely,
womanwriter
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from tammipratt
I have a younger sister, and I feel exactly the same way. It's such an important bond. I always impress in my daughter's to be kind to each other and be friends - for later in life too.
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I have a younger sister, and I feel exactly the same way. It's such an important bond. I always impress in my daughter's to be kind to each other and be friends - for later in life too.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from Minglement
What a wonderful tribute to your sister. Beautiful artwork, that compliments your work. Does your sister write, as well? Thanks for sharing.
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What a wonderful tribute to your sister. Beautiful artwork, that compliments your work. Does your sister write, as well? Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
Comment from skye
Sisters are the best....
agonizing and delightful, depending on the circumstances, but always there for a hand or a giggle.
Love the artwork, exquisite.
Very well done.
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Sisters are the best....
agonizing and delightful, depending on the circumstances, but always there for a hand or a giggle.
Love the artwork, exquisite.
Very well done.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2009
Comment from Diane Marie
What a lovely poem. The love you have for your sister shines through every line. I have always wanted a sister, it must be a wonderful gift.
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What a lovely poem. The love you have for your sister shines through every line. I have always wanted a sister, it must be a wonderful gift.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2009
Comment from Perp Ihebom
A very nice tribute to a beloved sister. I enjoyed reading it because the rhymes and rhythm were very regular and steady. Nice diction and clear meaning too. kudos
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A very nice tribute to a beloved sister. I enjoyed reading it because the rhymes and rhythm were very regular and steady. Nice diction and clear meaning too. kudos
Comment Written 09-Mar-2009