Reflections For The New Day
Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "Detour Or Destiny?"18 total reviews
Comment from literaturelove
Very moving I loved it. I think we all wait for something whether it be our destiny or if we take another road away from our destiny. Some will follow their destiny while others will walk away from it take another road.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2009
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Very moving I loved it. I think we all wait for something whether it be our destiny or if we take another road away from our destiny. Some will follow their destiny while others will walk away from it take another road.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2009
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Glad you loved this one too. Keep reading, keep writing. I hope you become a fan. Don't miss out. I'm here for ya.
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Good Monday morning poet Jewell and I loved this poem to accompany your awesome artwork. Your poem had indeed allowed th emind to ponder and the spirit to be set free. Good work, Loyd
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Good Monday morning poet Jewell and I loved this poem to accompany your awesome artwork. Your poem had indeed allowed th emind to ponder and the spirit to be set free. Good work, Loyd
Comment Written 09-Mar-2009
Comment from sueseagull
Wow this is just simply beautiful! I really like the lack of sunctauation, it adds to the poem alot.My favorite line is "shaded by memorie's shadows", so eloquently put. A thoroughly enjoyable read!
SUE
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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Wow this is just simply beautiful! I really like the lack of sunctauation, it adds to the poem alot.My favorite line is "shaded by memorie's shadows", so eloquently put. A thoroughly enjoyable read!
SUE
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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I really am awed by your response to this poem. Thank you! Some got it, some did not. I see you GOT IT! I love your work as well, you know! The sixer comes as a nice treat.
Comment from bluefly
Hi Jewell,
This poem carries quite a profound message. You found a beautifully poetic way of elaborating on the truth of what goes around comes around. I love the line "Shaded by memories' shadows". Lovely!
Scott
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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Hi Jewell,
This poem carries quite a profound message. You found a beautifully poetic way of elaborating on the truth of what goes around comes around. I love the line "Shaded by memories' shadows". Lovely!
Scott
Comment Written 07-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2009
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Thank you so much.
Comment from malachi1206
Very nice poem it is clean fresh the kind we all like reading really could get into it especially the last line excellent write malachi1206
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Very nice poem it is clean fresh the kind we all like reading really could get into it especially the last line excellent write malachi1206
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
Comment from bard owl
"Detour or Destiny? that is a very thought-provoking title. In fact, the whole poem is thought-provoking. It demands that the reader take a journey with you through the past and look forward into what might come to be. Excellent reflective imagery in this one. Blessings to you, Linda
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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"Detour or Destiny? that is a very thought-provoking title. In fact, the whole poem is thought-provoking. It demands that the reader take a journey with you through the past and look forward into what might come to be. Excellent reflective imagery in this one. Blessings to you, Linda
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Thank you LInda. I love it when you stop by to review. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Fat man Says
Your poem 'Detour Or Destiny'is really good...And your Art Work is fantastic...I've choosing three to start with...Now if my pen will help me out I'll post in a day or two...Bob
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Your poem 'Detour Or Destiny'is really good...And your Art Work is fantastic...I've choosing three to start with...Now if my pen will help me out I'll post in a day or two...Bob
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Oh good! Thank you so very much!
Comment from Judian James
Nice!! Very nice indeed. It's thoughtful and thought provoking for the reader. It has a beauiful flow for free verse and I loved: "Recycled decisions The constant circle
Finally brings revelation To change what was" followed by your kick-ass punchline! Bravo
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Nice!! Very nice indeed. It's thoughtful and thought provoking for the reader. It has a beauiful flow for free verse and I loved: "Recycled decisions The constant circle
Finally brings revelation To change what was" followed by your kick-ass punchline! Bravo
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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hehe! Thank you so very much Jude! I loved your enthusiastic review! So good to hear from our best.
Comment from penelope
Your artwork is perfect and beautiful for this philosophical poem, VP. True to your bio info, you've chosen your words carefully. So true too. Our destiny is not written in stone, we can always choose new paths filled with light, or at least try. Penelope
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Your artwork is perfect and beautiful for this philosophical poem, VP. True to your bio info, you've chosen your words carefully. So true too. Our destiny is not written in stone, we can always choose new paths filled with light, or at least try. Penelope
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Thanks so very much pen!
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi VP,
I do love your art. It is awesome. Sounds like that past just wasn't the right time, but now that the right time presents itself new decisions are made and I'd be willing to bet that since that time has arrived, the lights presence is also as profound. Good job! A lot of depth to your poem giving the reader a lot of thought. Thank you for sharing and God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Hi VP,
I do love your art. It is awesome. Sounds like that past just wasn't the right time, but now that the right time presents itself new decisions are made and I'd be willing to bet that since that time has arrived, the lights presence is also as profound. Good job! A lot of depth to your poem giving the reader a lot of thought. Thank you for sharing and God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Thank you so very much my friend!