CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 44 "Pierced"A collection of poetry
43 total reviews
Comment from Minglement
Well, leave it to the master to set the bar high. Excellent interpretation and description that touches the reader's heart (or yanks it out, or something!). Great entry. Thanks for sharing and thanks for a neat contest. Good luck.
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Well, leave it to the master to set the bar high. Excellent interpretation and description that touches the reader's heart (or yanks it out, or something!). Great entry. Thanks for sharing and thanks for a neat contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2009
Comment from Poetic Friend
Wow, this is sharp in execution, metaphor and message!
A bleeding heart bears much pain -- sharp penetrating precision, as your poem indicates.
Is there a poetic form that you can not master?
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Wow, this is sharp in execution, metaphor and message!
A bleeding heart bears much pain -- sharp penetrating precision, as your poem indicates.
Is there a poetic form that you can not master?
Comment Written 22-Feb-2009
Comment from c_lucas
It appears to me that you have met the criteria. Well written with very smooth sentences. Good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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It appears to me that you have met the criteria. Well written with very smooth sentences. Good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2009
Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
Wow, this is wonderful. You did an excellent job with this. I really enjoyed reading it. And the picture--perfect! Good luck in the contest.
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Wow, this is wonderful. You did an excellent job with this. I really enjoyed reading it. And the picture--perfect! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2009
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Pierced' is an extremely well written piece with a hint of vampire hovering over it. This talented poet's work was a pleasure both to read and review.
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'Pierced' is an extremely well written piece with a hint of vampire hovering over it. This talented poet's work was a pleasure both to read and review.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2009
Comment from honeytree
I love the art work here and your wonderful words written.
Piercing of ones heart with sadness from a broken heart or sadness concerning our loved ones and friends can be overwhelming.
I loved everyword written and the art work is superb.
Honeytree.
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I love the art work here and your wonderful words written.
Piercing of ones heart with sadness from a broken heart or sadness concerning our loved ones and friends can be overwhelming.
I loved everyword written and the art work is superb.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2009
Comment from Gramma Kathy
Ouch! Your razor-sharp clarity pyramid grabbed my attention with its black font on red background.
Clarity pyramids are one type of poetry I have not yet attempted. They seem too difficult to me, but you have made the form make sense.
I am impressed.
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Ouch! Your razor-sharp clarity pyramid grabbed my attention with its black font on red background.
Clarity pyramids are one type of poetry I have not yet attempted. They seem too difficult to me, but you have made the form make sense.
I am impressed.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2009
Comment from Brandenpaul
Yet another form. You are a brave one for trying so many and pulling them off no doubt. I enjoyed this one, the imagery the words create makes one shudder a bit. I tought the picture was a perfect addition. Good luck in the contest.
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Yet another form. You are a brave one for trying so many and pulling them off no doubt. I enjoyed this one, the imagery the words create makes one shudder a bit. I tought the picture was a perfect addition. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2009
Comment from Karen B.
"while hope stems the bleeding heart"
I love that phrase. You've done a nice job of describing the pain of lost love. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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"while hope stems the bleeding heart"
I love that phrase. You've done a nice job of describing the pain of lost love. Good luck in the contest. Karen
Comment Written 20-Feb-2009
Comment from MJMuraco
I had to read this many times to truly absorb the concept of the pyramid. The photo and the lines truly are very full of image. Great job with this.
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I had to read this many times to truly absorb the concept of the pyramid. The photo and the lines truly are very full of image. Great job with this.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2009