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Time Portal

A journey back in time to an event.

33 total reviews 
Comment from BJean
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This is so beautiful and heartwarming. I rejoice that you know our saviour and really celebrate what He Has done for us. It puts joy in our hearts and we can walk with a skip toward home. Very well written

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2009

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2009
    Thank you BJean. I don't know what to say. I'm speechless and I'm never at a loss for words until now! May God Bless you.
reply by BJean on 06-Nov-2009
    May He ricly bless you, too. Love, Jean
Comment from amada
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Some of your phrases touched me. We can see God in the face of a stranger. I always remember those words. I carry a smile to everyone, especially the ones who the world don't want to smile at.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2009

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2009
    Thank you amada for pulling this piece out from the archives. I am glad some of this touched you. I appreciate the great review.
Comment from Ms. Buckeye
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I was almost brought to tears. For some reason I instantly went to the crucifixion of Christ. So, you obviously set it up right. As an aspiring Christian writer I see you put the focus on Christ which is the ultimate goal. Be blessed

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2009

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2009
    I'm glad you feel I set this up right, but it is Jesus who gets the credit and the glory. Thank you for your wonderful review.
Comment from minopavlic
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We never do take the time to just look around us and in reflection,one would certainly have to question their spirituality,I think it's mystical and very majestic that the lord has a purpose for us all

Thanks for sharing
No_obstacle



 Comment Written 15-Feb-2009

reply by the author on 15-Feb-2009
    Thank you for your kind review and reflection. The question and the answer in my story is quite simple isn't it? Just say, "yes." May God Bless you in your endeavors.
reply by minopavlic on 16-Feb-2009
    Sorry for my delayed response, Sunday is definitely my church day :}.I see things differently as within its simplicity the answer comes before the question, if that makes sense? Its always a big yes

    God bless

    Mino
Comment from joan marie
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This one I read twice to make sure I got the full meaning of what you are saying. Jesus dying on the cross and our environment dying all around us as we continue to disregard His wonders. I hope I interpreted this correctly. joan marie

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2009

reply by the author on 14-Feb-2009
    Thank you for your kind twice-read review. I hope you enjoyed reading it. God Bless
reply by joan marie on 15-Feb-2009
    I did. I just wanted to get the meaning. I will read things twice not because I didn't get it but somtimes there is more than meets the eye. jm
Comment from cheyennewy
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Hi GentleWind....this is a lovely story and one I enjoyed from the first line to the last. It is quite beautiful and reads like a free verse poem. The imagery is superb as is the message....well done....blessings....chey

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2009

reply by the author on 14-Feb-2009
    I am honored by your gracious review. Glad you enjoyed it. Blessings
Comment from Annelisa
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What an absolutely beautiful tale. It reads like poetry. You have inspired me to write about an event that I experienced indirectly. I will post it when I feel I have done it justice. Annelisa

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2009

reply by the author on 14-Feb-2009
    Thank you for the kind review. You are the second person to mention it reads like poetry. I appreciate your comments and I'm glad I have inspired you. God Bless your endeavors.
Comment from spellbound
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A beautifully touching piece. I hope it touches the hearts of many. I especially love how you personalized the scripture.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2009

reply by the author on 14-Feb-2009
    Thank you Spellbound, for your kind review. My intention was to bring the Truth to as many as would read it. As I read the Word every morning, I personalize it. It would mean nothing if it were not speaking to me personally. God bless
Comment from c_lucas
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A very different perspective of John 3:16, but it fits into the Valentine Spirit. A good flow of words making for a very easy read. Good imagery and descriptive scheme.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2009

reply by the author on 14-Feb-2009
    Thank you for your great review. He is my only Valentine!
reply by c_lucas on 14-Feb-2009
    You're welcome,
Comment from Domino
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Hi there.
I usually find spiritualist writing tiresome and samey, but, bein short, I gave it a whirl. Excellent writing and I was caught off guard by the ending. Nice one, Ray xx

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2009

reply by the author on 14-Feb-2009
    I am so glad you stopped by. Thank you for the kind review and I'm thrilled you were caught off guard!