CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 63 "A Knee-Slapper"A collection of poetry
28 total reviews
Comment from Poetic Friend
True, true, Sue, there's nothing like laughing aloud. Laughter is the best medicine.
You adhered to the form perfectly.
I admire your ability to write several forms to perfection.
Great job!
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True, true, Sue, there's nothing like laughing aloud. Laughter is the best medicine.
You adhered to the form perfectly.
I admire your ability to write several forms to perfection.
Great job!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2009
Comment from Dreamdancer
Big smile,
I needed this after reading some of the other entries. Great rhythm and flow my friend and good luck with the contest... Dreamdancer
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Big smile,
I needed this after reading some of the other entries. Great rhythm and flow my friend and good luck with the contest... Dreamdancer
Comment Written 05-Feb-2009
Comment from aviddbrut
fun poem. you do a fine job with this triolet. you adhere to the form well. and Laughing out loud is good for the soul, when one can do it. good luck in the contest.
david
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fun poem. you do a fine job with this triolet. you adhere to the form well. and Laughing out loud is good for the soul, when one can do it. good luck in the contest.
david
Comment Written 04-Feb-2009
Comment from NadineM
This is an upbeat, joyful poem. You're right, there's nothing like a good chuckle.
Only suggestion I'd make is to change each "chuckle" to chuckling.
Good luck in the contest.
Thank-you for sharing this with me.
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This is an upbeat, joyful poem. You're right, there's nothing like a good chuckle.
Only suggestion I'd make is to change each "chuckle" to chuckling.
Good luck in the contest.
Thank-you for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2009
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
Nice triolet and good entry into the contest....good luck. You're so right...nothing is as contagious as a good laugh! Hugs and smiles, Susanne
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Nice triolet and good entry into the contest....good luck. You're so right...nothing is as contagious as a good laugh! Hugs and smiles, Susanne
Comment Written 04-Feb-2009
Comment from wierdgrace
you amaze me so much, in all the different ways you can write so many poems, this is wonderful, cheerful in many ways, and a great entry for the contest, good luck as you know I love it.
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you amaze me so much, in all the different ways you can write so many poems, this is wonderful, cheerful in many ways, and a great entry for the contest, good luck as you know I love it.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2009
Comment from sherlock85
Very cute. I like it. It's fun-filled, springy, bouncy and made me smile. I think it would be hard for someone to read this and not smile afterwards.
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Very cute. I like it. It's fun-filled, springy, bouncy and made me smile. I think it would be hard for someone to read this and not smile afterwards.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2009
Comment from mermaids
It is so true, laughing is good medicine and makes laugh much better, good work and tribute to what makes us healthy,
god luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2009
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It is so true, laughing is good medicine and makes laugh much better, good work and tribute to what makes us healthy,
god luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2009
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mermaids, it does make us healthy! Thank you for your very kind review and comments. With regards, Sue
Comment from Angelwhite
very nice. thank you for explaining the form that you chose to use. That helps me to better critique as I don't know all forms of poetry. I didn't see any SPAG and it makes me smile from the beginning with the picture, and the words remind me of times and things that made me laugh like you wrote about. :)
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2009
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very nice. thank you for explaining the form that you chose to use. That helps me to better critique as I don't know all forms of poetry. I didn't see any SPAG and it makes me smile from the beginning with the picture, and the words remind me of times and things that made me laugh like you wrote about. :)
Comment Written 04-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2009
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Angelwhite, so glad it brought back to "knee-slapping" memories. Aren't they a blast! Thank you for your very kind and thorough review. With regards, Sue
Comment from WRITER1
Laughter is the best medicine, that's what they say. You made that point quite well. This is a good piece. No revision needed.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2009
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Laughter is the best medicine, that's what they say. You made that point quite well. This is a good piece. No revision needed.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2009
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Writer1, indeed, it IS the best medicine. Thanks for your compliments and the very kind review. Sue