CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "In My Closet"A collection of poetry
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Comment from KYPollard/El Gato
Your poem is well written and the message is nicely presented while keeping within guidelines. It was my pleasure to read. I found no errors here. Good luck.
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Your poem is well written and the message is nicely presented while keeping within guidelines. It was my pleasure to read. I found no errors here. Good luck.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
Comment from Summer Falls
Ah, very well done! You are right, whether we like it or not, cynicism creeps in as we age. Hey, let's just stay young!
Your poem met the criteria well and your ideas were conveys through rhymes. Good luck in the contest.
Summer
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Ah, very well done! You are right, whether we like it or not, cynicism creeps in as we age. Hey, let's just stay young!
Your poem met the criteria well and your ideas were conveys through rhymes. Good luck in the contest.
Summer
Comment Written 13-Mar-2009
Comment from findingmyroom
Yes, indeed. "So full of doubt Must toss it out" yet never finding the strength to actually do so sounds very familiar. Thank you for voicing this feeling so clearly.
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Yes, indeed. "So full of doubt Must toss it out" yet never finding the strength to actually do so sounds very familiar. Thank you for voicing this feeling so clearly.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2009
Comment from Readywriter52
Your poem follows the minute poetry rule. The picture goes well with the poem. We do have the tendency to keep old clothes and then wear them out of guilt.
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Your poem follows the minute poetry rule. The picture goes well with the poem. We do have the tendency to keep old clothes and then wear them out of guilt.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2009
Comment from chaswriter
Sue - Being a cynic (wearing that dress) is just a reflection of one's life and how people have lived up to the trust one imparts to another. We are weary of other's intentions. Loved the way you said it in metaphors. Charlie
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Sue - Being a cynic (wearing that dress) is just a reflection of one's life and how people have lived up to the trust one imparts to another. We are weary of other's intentions. Loved the way you said it in metaphors. Charlie
Comment Written 06-Feb-2009
Comment from Arkine
I couldn't agree more, I've found myself saying things, or thinking things that surprise even me. I wonder at times if I see any good in people anymore. Then I listen to my husband talk and I think, well at least I'm not that bad yet. ~L~ Great job on this, maybe we can all try to practice less of this.
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I couldn't agree more, I've found myself saying things, or thinking things that surprise even me. I wonder at times if I see any good in people anymore. Then I listen to my husband talk and I think, well at least I'm not that bad yet. ~L~ Great job on this, maybe we can all try to practice less of this.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2009
Comment from XR15
Hi there again Sue
you've been very busy once more.
This is a really good writing format. I think it lends itself to nice encapsulated ideas. This one is very clever - I really enjoyed it and wish you well in the contest with it.
Cheers
Chris
ps i know I should be writing sonnets and not reviewing - but need the cash lol
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Hi there again Sue
you've been very busy once more.
This is a really good writing format. I think it lends itself to nice encapsulated ideas. This one is very clever - I really enjoyed it and wish you well in the contest with it.
Cheers
Chris
ps i know I should be writing sonnets and not reviewing - but need the cash lol
Comment Written 06-Feb-2009
Comment from Poetic Friend
We all have a favorite garment that perhaps we should have tossed ages ago. We feel guilty for tossing it, although we should.
This is quite an interesting poetic form. I must try writing one soon.
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We all have a favorite garment that perhaps we should have tossed ages ago. We feel guilty for tossing it, although we should.
This is quite an interesting poetic form. I must try writing one soon.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2009
Comment from Brandenpaul
The minute poem is a very clever style. I thinking it must be difficult, yet your poem seems like it just flowed out of your pen-so to speak. I enjoyed it and now will go clean my closet.
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The minute poem is a very clever style. I thinking it must be difficult, yet your poem seems like it just flowed out of your pen-so to speak. I enjoyed it and now will go clean my closet.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2009
Comment from grassroots08
Thanks for the reminder, I really should toss out a few of those silly shirts that I once thought looked great on me. What in blazes was I thinking? LOL Cheers, This was well told and got my writer juices flowing again, Don
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2009
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Thanks for the reminder, I really should toss out a few of those silly shirts that I once thought looked great on me. What in blazes was I thinking? LOL Cheers, This was well told and got my writer juices flowing again, Don
Comment Written 05-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2009
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Awesome, Don! Now all I've got to do it go through my stockpiled inbox and find yours to read! LOL!!! Thanks for your great review! Sue
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