CSP: A Collection of Poems
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33 total reviews
Comment from mmichelle97219
I call these sort of people FIGJAM. It stands for "fuck I'm good just ask me". it is a good poem and captures the spirit of these aweful people.
Happy Writing
Michelle
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I call these sort of people FIGJAM. It stands for "fuck I'm good just ask me". it is a good poem and captures the spirit of these aweful people.
Happy Writing
Michelle
Comment Written 04-Feb-2009
Comment from amada
Ha, ha. I laughted at this one. Very well written. The haughty, self-importance crowned in false hopes of superiority. Great work, great words.
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Ha, ha. I laughted at this one. Very well written. The haughty, self-importance crowned in false hopes of superiority. Great work, great words.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2009
Comment from JoAnna Lee
Another fine rictameter, my friend. You are having fun with this form and do it so well. I enjoyed this one. HOW TRUE IT IS!!! Liked the two-faces drawing, too. Did you draw that?
Thanks for sharing,
Donna
PS - Did you ever read my other one, "God's Love"?
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Another fine rictameter, my friend. You are having fun with this form and do it so well. I enjoyed this one. HOW TRUE IT IS!!! Liked the two-faces drawing, too. Did you draw that?
Thanks for sharing,
Donna
PS - Did you ever read my other one, "God's Love"?
Comment Written 04-Feb-2009
Comment from steevie
an interesting poem and good for thought
sometimes we all get 'too big for our britches', as the saying goes, but to be aware of it and make changes, is the main thing
well thought out piece, Six
steve
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an interesting poem and good for thought
sometimes we all get 'too big for our britches', as the saying goes, but to be aware of it and make changes, is the main thing
well thought out piece, Six
steve
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
Comment from MJMuraco
You wrote a great poem with a very strong message. Most people that act superior and nasty are very insecure. This is their defense mechanism. The poem flows nicely and you did a nice job.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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You wrote a great poem with a very strong message. Most people that act superior and nasty are very insecure. This is their defense mechanism. The poem flows nicely and you did a nice job.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Yes, the are very insecure. And along with their being haughty, they carry a lot of anger. Thanks for your very kind review and comments. With regards, Sue
Comment from fictionwriter
Another wonderfully done poem. The message is clear and the picture that you painted all too true. What a wonderful little picture you picked to go with it. Great job.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Another wonderfully done poem. The message is clear and the picture that you painted all too true. What a wonderful little picture you picked to go with it. Great job.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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fictionwriter, thanks so much for your very generous review and comments. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from Adri7enne
That's telling them, girl! I agree. Some people display such a contemptuous attitude, as if their deigning to communicate with you should be considered an honor. Oh, well. At least your little poem states your position on the attitude. Good work. Loved it.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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That's telling them, girl! I agree. Some people display such a contemptuous attitude, as if their deigning to communicate with you should be considered an honor. Oh, well. At least your little poem states your position on the attitude. Good work. Loved it.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Yes....an "honor'. You nailed it! Thanks for your great review and your comments. With regards, Sue
Comment from rmdelta
poetry like this always leaves me asking why? Why do they call this poetry? I don't understand these type writings or even the reason someone wants to write one of them. lol I'm giving you five stars because I know how well you write so it must be well written.
Reggie
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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poetry like this always leaves me asking why? Why do they call this poetry? I don't understand these type writings or even the reason someone wants to write one of them. lol I'm giving you five stars because I know how well you write so it must be well written.
Reggie
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Reggie, reggie, reggie....stop it and leave me alone!! LOL!! :-))
Comment from Perp Ihebom
I like the message in this poem.I completely agree with you that all forms of haughtiness are caused by inferiority complex. The artistry in line arrangement is also fine. kudos
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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I like the message in this poem.I completely agree with you that all forms of haughtiness are caused by inferiority complex. The artistry in line arrangement is also fine. kudos
Comment Written 03-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Perp, we should feel sorry for them, but it just isn't possible. Ha! Thanks so much for your review and comments. With regards, Sue
Comment from Joan E.
Where did you find that fascinating drawing to illustrate your poem?
This is a well-crafted rictameter that also has the quality of being true. You created a neat title too.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2009
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Where did you find that fascinating drawing to illustrate your poem?
This is a well-crafted rictameter that also has the quality of being true. You created a neat title too.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2009
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I find all my images on google. Just go to google, type in what you'd like to portray and hit the "images" button at upper left hand side. Tons of images! Thanks for your very kind review. Glad you liked the title, too! Sue
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Thanks for letting me in on your secret.
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shhhhh..... (ha!) The key is at times you have to change your words a bit about what you want. You get the hang of it soon, as you learn the types of images that do pop up. Glad to share it!