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Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "the world's on fire"keep your hope alive....
7 total reviews
Comment from BJsView
Wonderful play on an old song ....
I love the idea that you followed through on and broght it up to date
I will be watching more of your work.... enjoyed!
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2009
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Wonderful play on an old song ....
I love the idea that you followed through on and broght it up to date
I will be watching more of your work.... enjoyed!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2009
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2009
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thankyalots! :)
Comment from Josipher32
I love how you challenged yourself to write this piece. This seems like a hard contest idea. I like the structure of your song with verses and choruses. Well written.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2009
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I love how you challenged yourself to write this piece. This seems like a hard contest idea. I like the structure of your song with verses and choruses. Well written.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2009
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took awhile to research the facts too lol
Comment from babylonia
shelley,
i like have been trying to remember the music to this one. the words look familiar but i still can't catch the beat. LOL i'll probably regret it when i do. you did a great job with your entry here. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. thanks for providing the original lyrics. so important.
keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2009
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shelley,
i like have been trying to remember the music to this one. the words look familiar but i still can't catch the beat. LOL i'll probably regret it when i do. you did a great job with your entry here. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. thanks for providing the original lyrics. so important.
keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara
Comment Written 15-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2009
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google it ;-)
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good idea
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Shelley,
okay my clever lady, looks like you a great entry for the contest very clever
I really wish you the best
Smiles
Gert
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2009
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Hi Shelley,
okay my clever lady, looks like you a great entry for the contest very clever
I really wish you the best
Smiles
Gert
Comment Written 15-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2009
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hehe thanx lots :)
Comment from Johnny Carwash
Excellent take on the classic song and, if I'm not mistaken, the first time I've ever read song lyrics from you. You always have free verse poems on here, but never anything like this. Great stuff.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2009
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Excellent take on the classic song and, if I'm not mistaken, the first time I've ever read song lyrics from you. You always have free verse poems on here, but never anything like this. Great stuff.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2009
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have some other lyrics too - just go to my profile page thingy where all my "books" are listed ;-)
Comment from Alexander E Poet
Wonderful poem very well done ,a powerful piece of poetry lovely expression, the flow works together with the words well.There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2009
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Wonderful poem very well done ,a powerful piece of poetry lovely expression, the flow works together with the words well.There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2009
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thank you :)
Comment from The Rivaling Mimic
I didn't take time to read the contest outline but no matter I still enjoyed this. This is good and interesting about the song aspect about it. Take care.
The Rivaling Mimic
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2009
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I didn't take time to read the contest outline but no matter I still enjoyed this. This is good and interesting about the song aspect about it. Take care.
The Rivaling Mimic
Comment Written 15-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2009
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thank you :)