Reflections For The New Day
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Passionate Pain"9 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
Brilliant art work and shaped like a heart and the words very precious and true. Unconditional love is what we need within our world. This does not happen in a lot of situations.
The empty years within our lives can happen and, as a woman we should be strong to face up to this but this can be a challenge. Belief and knowing our selves as a woman, is very important for our growth and happiness.
When the baby comes is so joyfull and precious to women and fathers.
Life takes on a different meaning with our children.
I loved the writers words so much.
Honeytree.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
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Brilliant art work and shaped like a heart and the words very precious and true. Unconditional love is what we need within our world. This does not happen in a lot of situations.
The empty years within our lives can happen and, as a woman we should be strong to face up to this but this can be a challenge. Belief and knowing our selves as a woman, is very important for our growth and happiness.
When the baby comes is so joyfull and precious to women and fathers.
Life takes on a different meaning with our children.
I loved the writers words so much.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
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Thanks so much honeytree for the kind review.
Comment from Dreamdancer
Hello dear lady,
Your heart spills forth with each elegantly written line ensnaring the reader from beginning to end.... Wonderful write my friend.... Dreamdancer
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
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Hello dear lady,
Your heart spills forth with each elegantly written line ensnaring the reader from beginning to end.... Wonderful write my friend.... Dreamdancer
Comment Written 11-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2009
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Thank you Buddy. It's so good to hear from you. Some of the best poetry comes with heartache for sure.
Comment from malachi1206
I guess I'll just remain your best 'unofficial' fan great write poetess articulate and artistic great flow and great use of free verse malachi1206
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
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I guess I'll just remain your best 'unofficial' fan great write poetess articulate and artistic great flow and great use of free verse malachi1206
Comment Written 09-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2009
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So why this 'unofficial' fan thing?
Thank you for reviewing this one.
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
You know you write the feelings I hold within myself so well. Now if only I could write those. LOL This is beautifully penned, and I do so relate to the last couple of your pens I've read.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
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You know you write the feelings I hold within myself so well. Now if only I could write those. LOL This is beautifully penned, and I do so relate to the last couple of your pens I've read.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
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We're probably not alone. If I don't write these, they stay "penned" in. Hey that's a cool metaphor. lol I appreciate you stopping by and getting personal.
Comment from Writer191
This is dynamic, and such a splendid expression of joy and sorrow. I rarely read work where I actually 'feel' the feeling. This is a heartstopper for your imagery and honesty and could only be written by someone who has 'been there'. Bravo, my sweet.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
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This is dynamic, and such a splendid expression of joy and sorrow. I rarely read work where I actually 'feel' the feeling. This is a heartstopper for your imagery and honesty and could only be written by someone who has 'been there'. Bravo, my sweet.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
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Thank you so very much for this very kind review and all those stars! I think my heart stopped and kick started several times in the last few months!
Comment from mmichelle97219
Love is never easy nor is it supposed to be. It is messy painful and will break your heart 500,000 million times a day. I thought your poem about passion's pain was really good.
Michelle
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
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Love is never easy nor is it supposed to be. It is messy painful and will break your heart 500,000 million times a day. I thought your poem about passion's pain was really good.
Michelle
Comment Written 07-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
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Hi Michelle, darling. Thank you for this kind review.
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Good morning poet friend.
Jewell, I find some pain and heart break, yet much wisdom gained.
It is a beautiful heart touching read.
Loyd
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
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Good morning poet friend.
Jewell, I find some pain and heart break, yet much wisdom gained.
It is a beautiful heart touching read.
Loyd
Comment Written 07-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
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All pain brings wisdom if we allow it.
Comment from Diny
That my dearest JJj was a very strong poem Ful of emotion and message and very heartfelt and reflective- You are on a roll and doing some wonderful things thus far this year- what a way to start it!- Hugs-Di
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
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That my dearest JJj was a very strong poem Ful of emotion and message and very heartfelt and reflective- You are on a roll and doing some wonderful things thus far this year- what a way to start it!- Hugs-Di
Comment Written 07-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009
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Thanks Diny
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
VisionaryPoet777, if we are going to feel pain, we may as well be passionate about it because purposeful notion coupled with self-confidence and being true to one's self can only lead to good things.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
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VisionaryPoet777, if we are going to feel pain, we may as well be passionate about it because purposeful notion coupled with self-confidence and being true to one's self can only lead to good things.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2009
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Yeppers :-)
