His Little Girl
Dialogue only Conversation With God (For Darlie)41 total reviews
Comment from Josipher32
This was a nicley written piece, and you did get my vote in this contest. Did I tell you that I mentioned your name briefly in my story "Get It Together, Jeez!" Have a great day.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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This was a nicley written piece, and you did get my vote in this contest. Did I tell you that I mentioned your name briefly in my story "Get It Together, Jeez!" Have a great day.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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Thank you so much. :-) I do appreciate it. I will take a look at your story! :-)
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from RenieReader
Excellent job of showing us what it is like between 'Dad' and His children--each and every one of them. I love the way you have written this dialogue so that everyone can see what He is really like and how much He loves us all.
Thank you and God bless,
Renie
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
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Excellent job of showing us what it is like between 'Dad' and His children--each and every one of them. I love the way you have written this dialogue so that everyone can see what He is really like and how much He loves us all.
Thank you and God bless,
Renie
Comment Written 18-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
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Thank you so much. I am blessed to read your words of encouragement and support.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from Kym Jade
This is a lovely little story/conversation we really enjoyed it; felt like we were eavesdropping. Good luck with the contest.
Love and blessings
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
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This is a lovely little story/conversation we really enjoyed it; felt like we were eavesdropping. Good luck with the contest.
Love and blessings
Comment Written 18-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
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Thank you so much! :-) You can listen in, I don't mind.
Hugs and Love,
Jani
Comment from RSayre45
Wow! This is really wonderful! I love how you bring God down to the terms that we humans understand, in the simplest of forms. So many scholars and theologians make Him so complex that oftentimes it seems impossible to really reach out and touch or be touched by Him.
I believe that in His case, less is more. Keeping it simple allows us to more fully experience and benefit from that unconditional love in which he shows us. I felt that in this piece strongly.
Thank you so much for sharing. Good luck with the contest, I believe you have a winner here (contest or not).
Smiles, Rebecca
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
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Wow! This is really wonderful! I love how you bring God down to the terms that we humans understand, in the simplest of forms. So many scholars and theologians make Him so complex that oftentimes it seems impossible to really reach out and touch or be touched by Him.
I believe that in His case, less is more. Keeping it simple allows us to more fully experience and benefit from that unconditional love in which he shows us. I felt that in this piece strongly.
Thank you so much for sharing. Good luck with the contest, I believe you have a winner here (contest or not).
Smiles, Rebecca
Comment Written 18-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2008
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Thank you so much, Rebecca. I do appreciate your terrific review.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from Sue-z-Q
Hi Jan:
Wonderful entry for the contest. Your words are full of tenderness and love. It's like a lovely Christmas Card to all of us who are privileged to read it.
The season rapidly approaches, so I wish you and yours Happy Holidays as my card to you. Good luck in the voting booth.
Sue-z-Q
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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Hi Jan:
Wonderful entry for the contest. Your words are full of tenderness and love. It's like a lovely Christmas Card to all of us who are privileged to read it.
The season rapidly approaches, so I wish you and yours Happy Holidays as my card to you. Good luck in the voting booth.
Sue-z-Q
Comment Written 18-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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Thank you so much once again! :-)
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Janilou:)
I never tire from hearing your faith in God. Your dialog with God is wonderful. I too talk with God in prayers, but I'm often uncertain if the reply I hear is God or My imagination.
I enjoy your clarity in this dialog. I can imagine this as a real serious talk providing answers you can relate to others. You speak to God as a close friend and that is wonderful.
Thank you for your sharing your insight in this great "Converstation with God." Good luck in the contest.
Roger
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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Hi Janilou:)
I never tire from hearing your faith in God. Your dialog with God is wonderful. I too talk with God in prayers, but I'm often uncertain if the reply I hear is God or My imagination.
I enjoy your clarity in this dialog. I can imagine this as a real serious talk providing answers you can relate to others. You speak to God as a close friend and that is wonderful.
Thank you for your sharing your insight in this great "Converstation with God." Good luck in the contest.
Roger
Comment Written 17-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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Thank you so much, Roger. Bless your heart. I am so glad you enjoyed reading this.
Comment from EllieKaye
Hi Jani-
This is really sweet. It's fun and innocent and it does indeed feel as if God were speaking. He would be so kind.
: ) EllieKaye
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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Hi Jani-
This is really sweet. It's fun and innocent and it does indeed feel as if God were speaking. He would be so kind.
: ) EllieKaye
Comment Written 17-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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Thank you so much. Yes, He would be. :-)
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from JBCaine
Jan,
Very nicely done, as usual. Touching, and yet not so seet that I wanted to run away. Good luck in the contest.
JB
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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Jan,
Very nicely done, as usual. Touching, and yet not so seet that I wanted to run away. Good luck in the contest.
JB
Comment Written 17-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your kindness.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from hyway94
I can see now that the goats aren't doing anything right now. If they were you be out there not on this PC. I just read another entry in this contest, and I have forgotten already what it was about. Well never let it be said I didn't try. This was very good no spag and the flow was great.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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I can see now that the goats aren't doing anything right now. If they were you be out there not on this PC. I just read another entry in this contest, and I have forgotten already what it was about. Well never let it be said I didn't try. This was very good no spag and the flow was great.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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THank you so much. Nope, not yet they aren't but we hope for something soon!
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from mmichelle97219
It has a very casual and friendly conversation. It has a warmth in it that just radiates. Out of all the entries I liked this one best. Excellent work. Good luck in the voting booth.
Michelle
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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It has a very casual and friendly conversation. It has a warmth in it that just radiates. Out of all the entries I liked this one best. Excellent work. Good luck in the voting booth.
Michelle
Comment Written 17-Dec-2008
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2008
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Thank you so much! I am honored by your comments.
Hugs,
Jan
